Week 1: sacrifice vs. Frank \\ Frank wins 11-1

dyedinthewool · 03-03-2014, 02:33 AM

sacrafice- i enjoyed reading your verse but i felt as if i was reading a topical sometimes and a short story another. i got lost somewhere along the line just trying to figure out how to read this. despite that disconnection, it was well written. i appreciate your use of words as well.

frank- crazy imagery, i felt like i was there! i am not the greatest baseball fan but this was much too live! your energy in this piece alone stands out for me. i enjoyed reading this and i felt you brought your piece to life

mvgt frank

03-03-2014, 02:33 AM	#13
dyedinthewool green eggs and damn Join Date: Feb 2014 Location: northeast Posts: 786 Battle Record: 1-4 Rep Power: 18308781	sacrafice- i enjoyed reading your verse but i felt as if i was reading a topical sometimes and a short story another. i got lost somewhere along the line just trying to figure out how to read this. despite that disconnection, it was well written. i appreciate your use of words as well. frank- crazy imagery, i felt like i was there! i am not the greatest baseball fan but this was much too live! your energy in this piece alone stands out for me. i enjoyed reading this and i felt you brought your piece to life mvgt frank