The Ascent of N00B

[Aesthetic]

I like the first one a lot more than the next. At first I was like; im not reading this, no way; then I decided to read it god knows why. I enjoyed it. Cant believed your rapped about noobs as the subject matter. You got spunk.

In all honesty I wasn't in the mood to read the 2nd part. Just skimmed over it and ended jumping like 12 bars lol.

meagerly rapping, moaning and groaning
chinless creatures chased by their own shadows, squealing in the mist
deceived by whispers, twisted dream eclipsers, seal them with a diss

Made me laugh idk why, it was pretty groovy.

acknowledged trash-talk rap-lords stands back all appalled
as the lyrical assault from false cults descends
stemming from a living hell, reppin' to the bitter end

Your use of the word cult's offends my intelligence. Im super lost, what does fals cult's descending lyrics have to do with your climax? Just felt real oughta place. This happens a few times throughout your piece I noticed..



YO DELTRON 3030 IS MY FUCKING SHIT HOW THE FUCK HE AINT FAMOUS RIGHT!? I cant seem to find the fucking music video where hes like in a spaceship or someshit covered in some alien electronics wildin the fuck out. Driving me yonkers..



brings back good memories this video got me freaking out. Black kids peels his skin and is white lolwtf