Hit 'em with the flex

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Hit 'em with the flex

01-25-2014, 02:42 PM

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Originally Posted by Xanax

Are you kitten me right meow I'm in the fourth degree

OP confirmed for nimbly pimbly

nah this was alright, good flow in a bunch of parts (conscious cats line) but your schemes could use more variety. pretty nice, esp. since you said you just started writing. keep keyin

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