Sleepin with sharks

Nigma · 01-22-2014, 03:08 PM

This hit home with me on multiple fronts. First off, I been diving with sharks before which was fuckin CRAZY. Went when I was in Hawaii a few years ago, it was on sale (which i later realised was because there was a tsunami warning). But anyways, that adventure really made that side this piece extra vivid for me, those are images I'll never forget.

To the piece itself, although you weren't a fan of this topic you fucking rocked it. The second way this hit home with me was because through the first 3 quarters of the verse it seemed like you were speaking on the relationship negatively and I'm goin through some of that shit too. The way you interwove the two themes throughout, going back and forth between the two, was really well thought out. That ending caught me off guard and really switched my view on the whole verse in a good way. Really great execution, props on a very solid drop

01-22-2014, 03:08 PM	#2
Nigma The COAT... Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: BC, Canada Posts: 1,723 Battle Record: 28-20 Champed - Art of Writing League (x3) Rep Power: 4595813	This hit home with me on multiple fronts. First off, I been diving with sharks before which was fuckin CRAZY. Went when I was in Hawaii a few years ago, it was on sale (which i later realised was because there was a tsunami warning). But anyways, that adventure really made that side this piece extra vivid for me, those are images I'll never forget. To the piece itself, although you weren't a fan of this topic you fucking rocked it. The second way this hit home with me was because through the first 3 quarters of the verse it seemed like you were speaking on the relationship negatively and I'm goin through some of that shit too. The way you interwove the two themes throughout, going back and forth between the two, was really well thought out. That ending caught me off guard and really switched my view on the whole verse in a good way. Really great execution, props on a very solid drop __________________