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Old 01-07-2014, 03:47 PM   #4
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Whats good, Fly, came to return the favor.

This piece read a lot like the last one i read from you (that one piece in the RIA league about your place in the topical writing circle). Allow me to get this part out of the way...why do you "/" the end of every line? that's mad newbish son, lol!! Anyways, i dig this piece for what it is. Basically a topical braggadocio piece haha. To piggyback on Vulgar's comment, there were some flash of brilliance but i also see some rust there. Heavily metaphor laced, i can't say fully understand some of the symbolism but i did suspect a scathing commentary on the power-that-be within the first few bars.

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My origin was wiped clean by the authorities that were over seeing
not sure if ur referring to mods from here or RIA as both incarnations were destroyed in favor of a new birth.

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All shady agents who a sang amazing grace if my cover came stampeding
^^i can imagine that may be the reason why, at times, you feel you have to switch up your alias or make a new name. or i could be misinterpreting lol.

So word, as a "yall better recognize my talent" piece, i thought it was an enjoyable read. Not one of your best but still enjoyable. Keep on.
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