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12-20-2013, 05:04 PM
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I like the right mix of self identification with a decent depth of vocab. I got the problem of a mental person. Your wordplay was cool in this verse to that pushed the imagery in here to the edges. I also like the darkness and lightness fighting in this. There were really no issues or problems and the fluidity was a supporting aspect that made this a dope read. Nice....143
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