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Old 12-04-2013, 03:48 AM   #1
Concrete
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Lightbulb The Butterflow Effect

knowledge is key - you're locked in a mental prison
trapped by the ignorant bars your pencil envision
creativity caged in brain-cells is a special condition
concrete rifts this volition to make a split decision
listen children, all these cheetahs are little kittens
I'm dissing bitten writtens to ridden bullshit skills
tryin pull this shit, can't reach me like Bushwick Bill


the blood will spill and fade these shady attacks
haters retract facing facts with blades in their backs
I am taking it back - to silence the feeble minded
they can't rewind it because this shit is timeless
deprived of brightness minors wanna test the finest
spineless fake smiles seen all trough the grapevine
fools wanna take mine better go low like a bassline
this aint a hate crime meaning my deeds are decent


meeting the needs of beings with need for beatings
leaving them leaches leaking, bleeding and weeping
sweeping these streets to simply sweeten the deals
keeping the creed, retrieved freedom, fuck Sweden
a legion of Norwegian heathens reaves the region
keepin on dreamin is fruitless like depletion of semen
a reason to commit treason and diss my penmanship?
you real like inflated tits, potent as dead mans dick


dunno what your end game is - you got it twisted
keep insisting on hitching to terms like "consistence"
sifting trough my imagery yet never get the picture
such ignorant indifference cant figure the scriptures
rather write poetry pieces to impress hoes n bitches
you illerate hipster trickers, my inner poet twitches
as my flow is ripping the tides to a new culture shift
cultivate these vulgar drifts with more doper spits


put more needles in you then your acupuncturist
cos the junture is - between the past and the fresh
seperate mass from flesh to put that ass to rest
concrete is way passed any test - above any law
your meager haymaking attempt was the last straw
I see trough trash talk coming from a glass jaw
smashed by a hacksaw <-- just me being impulsive
don't think you bounce back while keying repulsive


Crete's compulsive, observe my verbs as hurtful omens
token murders reoccurs by the spur of the moment
the words spoken shivers down the spines of killers
flows deliver similar to shimmering rivers of elixirs
so drink the liquor of wicked slickness, have a zip
I unlatch my wizz so cats n kids can catch my drift
adapt to this, if you choose to snooze you lose
assume freethinkers got a loose screw, screw you
I groove through roofs you rendezvous with blues


impending doom booms and will eventually damage
no need for mind games, you're mentally challenged
take any challenge, simple and plain, let me explain..
I'll put sickness in your veins just to witness the pain
only stitches remains as your nerves crumbles quick
got a couple of clips to burst your bubble bitch
humble you quick and teach you what subtlety is
force you to cuddle and kiss with a puddle of piss


this is no subtle diss..


I despise generic kids from the grit of my heart
straight outha the assembly line, easily pick you apart
think you're smart? C rips fools clearly missing clues
you're like hollow men, I still see the bitch in you
that wants dick in you, so fuck sexual preferences
establish some skills if you wanna settle our differences
offended kids can't comprehend this, don't be strident
battling is like a vacation, I just RESORT to violence


violating your friction, I ain't cut for your commission?
fuck your click son - split your wig, that's my division
listen, I spit suberb emissions like nuclear fissions
you belivin' in yourself... is just being superstitious
super vicious, to put it blatant, rhymes blaze amazing
like a chemo-patients the haters is facing radiation
seek salvation, no angels here only demon-strations


like an evil agent, I killed you all with my last blow
call me necrophile also, molesting you dead assholes
with crass flows, let's be candid, kill yall like cancer
disgraces like you couldn't dignify this with answers
chanceless pranksters, a chainsaw is heavensent
decompose bodyparts, leave no shreds of evidence

you'll never see negligence
from my this filled with lead

recollect, don't forget, feeders get fed
just nourished you with a pill - that is red
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