Week 8 - TITLE MATCH - Frank (5-2) vs. Certain (6-1) - FRANK WINS 8-0

e11even · 11-18-2013, 01:37 AM

Certain- That shit was pretty dope. This persona you adopted for the verse sounds like a demon trapped in a flesh reincarnated and it's like life is trying to force feeling as a karma, when in-fact, he's incapable.
That thought aside, this was prety well written and full of direct content, yet an elusive form of execution. Seemingly effortless on your part. Good stuff.

Frank- This was very beautifully written. You paint pictures like no other, my friend. Some parts seemed like they rhymed in an excessive annoying way, moreso, than some other pieces I've read from you. As a whole though, this was a gorgeous caption to a family occassion gone right in a family full of, what seems to be, potentially dramatic circumstances. There were so many facets to each of the characters, almost as if you could have written a book to entail every backstory. Great work.

Great battle. You both brought typically entertaining verse per your writing personas. This was the most interesting battle I've read this week, and I look forward to both of your drops next week. MVGT Frank for a more thoroughly explored story with fully imagined characters and an engaging, descriptive atmosphere. Awesome work guys.

11-18-2013, 01:37 AM	#12
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	Certain- That shit was pretty dope. This persona you adopted for the verse sounds like a demon trapped in a flesh reincarnated and it's like life is trying to force feeling as a karma, when in-fact, he's incapable. That thought aside, this was prety well written and full of direct content, yet an elusive form of execution. Seemingly effortless on your part. Good stuff. Frank- This was very beautifully written. You paint pictures like no other, my friend. Some parts seemed like they rhymed in an excessive annoying way, moreso, than some other pieces I've read from you. As a whole though, this was a gorgeous caption to a family occassion gone right in a family full of, what seems to be, potentially dramatic circumstances. There were so many facets to each of the characters, almost as if you could have written a book to entail every backstory. Great work. Great battle. You both brought typically entertaining verse per your writing personas. This was the most interesting battle I've read this week, and I look forward to both of your drops next week. MVGT Frank for a more thoroughly explored story with fully imagined characters and an engaging, descriptive atmosphere. Awesome work guys. __________________ Ahem.