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#7 |
Razor-thin derision
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 4,422
Battle Record: 40-25
Accomplishments - OM HOF
Champed - Fight Night LIV
- Gimmick Battle League (2x)
- Write Week II
- Art of Writing League
- Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament
- STI
- Haiku Writer Challenge
- GWL Picture Challenge(2x)
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ZYG - This was decent, judging this by how much I enjoyed it, and also what it did with the topic. You've a knack for never getting writer's block, and you rarely ever have trouble hacking into a topic and fleshing it out into something unexpected. This one was self explanatory and just brushed at the surface.
DAM - lol. Showing this league how it's done with a nice twist. Very reminiscent of the RFBL days. Good, crisp rhyming and presentation. No complaints. You did your thing here. Vote - DAM |
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