One day (whole song) RJD2 beat

[breathless]

Originally Posted by Mr. J

I'm awfully confused by the timing of the beat and lines
I feel like it throws off the whole vibe from it being said
regardless I feel like you have got done the whole...control of what you do
how you say it, and whether or not you can keep it cohesive or not
it probably works smoother for you when you do it yourself
but I feel kind of thrown off as I try to read it with the beat...
I felt after 2 minutes you went in though breh...nice work

weird, I think I may have been on drugs when I wrote the breakdown (most likely) there's a shit load of word errors as well... I just tried to follow it again, and I couldn't, it's like 2-5 seconds off either way for each verse/chorus, then i went to try and record it only to discover my computer mic has been repeatedly ran over by the chair wheels... made a rough recording with my phone and computer speakers, just going off instinct and it wasn't too bad aside from the volume inconsistency... I'll figure something out eventually