Week 6 - Tyson (1-0) vs. symetrik (1-1) - SYMETRIK WINS 6-4

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symetrik:

slug much? i could hear him performing this as i read every line. don't know if that was your intention, but between the subject matter and the flow it was like a clone. i enjoyed it, though i think wearing "a" guise would have fit better unless there was some subtle homoerotic wordplay i didn't pick up on. there wasn't anything mindblowing to it, but the word choice was great and you described the emotions of this character accurately.

tyson:

first off - skies, elude, mills, reap, think, through

"These immortal diamond works as a prism to deflect the dark matter of my decisions"

^ liked this

"absolute silence.." <- that line was trying to be deep and instead made no sense. i know what you were going for.

this verse read like what a battle rapper would put together if he was told to type the stereotypical topical verse. a lot of pontificating and amg i'm so deep type lines. there were way too many metaphors for my liking and the topic has been done to death (no pun intended). a good start, hope you stick around.

v/ symetrik