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#10 |
Razor-thin derision
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 4,422
Battle Record: 40-25
Accomplishments - OM HOF
Champed - Fight Night LIV
- Gimmick Battle League (2x)
- Write Week II
- Art of Writing League
- Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament
- STI
- Haiku Writer Challenge
- GWL Picture Challenge(2x)
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Symetrik - Good writing for sure, just not really a thoroughly executed verse. It was short-winded and didn't cover any significant amount of ground for me. Very likeable in some parts though.
Tyson - Bad wording at the end killed your chances of getting my vote. I thought you were gaining enough momentum during the middle but then it sort of simmered down until you ended it. Okay take on the topic. Vote - Symetrik because it was different and I liked it more. |
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