DOPE concept, wordplay integrity & conceptual expansion example

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@Genocide @Anonymous @Jah Homie @Cashius @Utmost

waddup ya'll

Utmost is in the process of crafting a banger for this tourney - and while i clearly won't break down every line of every verse to this level of detail

this is (likely) my FINAL example

I know it is long, but PLEASE READ THIS!!!
Conceptual expansion and wordplay integrity opportunities were a very common theme for this group.


It is for you after all -- and I really want to make sure these brain dumps are helping, because they take me longer than you might think lol. -- if they are not, you really need to let me know, no offense taken, I "get it", i was very selective with who gave me guidance back in my day (but that was a mistake i wish I would change if I did it again, because i've spent the back half of my 'text years' fixing bad habits which were ingrained in my writing at that point)


BREAKDOWN BELOW!