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10-23-2013, 07:42 PM
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diabolical portrait of space battle - added character machine almost threw a wrench in the works but you pushed the boundaries here. from a creativity stand point, with the pictures, and story line, this was one of the more creative pieces I've read in a long time. The actual content was pretty good but the contrast of voices with the different flows was very theatrical.
this kendrick lamar text style could work for you.
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