**Freeverse**

NYCSPITZ · 10-09-2013, 01:16 PM

Mentally engaging and fluid piece. I'll echo oxus here and say that I felt this was a rather fragmented drop; freeflowing scattered although far higher than average mental energy. For a freeverse it was excellent, you have a strong command of the English language, you're creative and you have some very pointed ideas that recur in your verses. I can see the Black D. imitation which isn't a bad thing, he's the best writer here. stay up

10-09-2013, 01:16 PM	#5
NYCSPITZ SYRACUSE Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,031 Battle Record: 31-37 Champed - Write Night II - Alias Topical Tournament Rep Power: 4743547	Mentally engaging and fluid piece. I'll echo oxus here and say that I felt this was a rather fragmented drop; freeflowing scattered although far higher than average mental energy. For a freeverse it was excellent, you have a strong command of the English language, you're creative and you have some very pointed ideas that recur in your verses. I can see the Black D. imitation which isn't a bad thing, he's the best writer here. stay up