Week 2 - Mr. J (1-0) vs. breathless (0-0) - MR. J WINS 9-4

Just Write · 10-04-2013, 09:35 PM

yo this was a dope battle. my favorite I've read this week so far, i'm not gunna quote either of your pieces because they were both dope to me. however I will point out that I felt more emotion in breathless' piece and more control in mr. j's.. I don't know if anyone else caught what you did Mr. J but I did. bravo on the basketball talk throughout the verse. seeing as how this is "creative writing" that helped to win me over as I love shit like that. truly the hardest decision I made out of the 3 battles I voted on, that's why I hit this last. anyways mvgt- Mr. J

10-04-2013, 09:35 PM	#9
Just Write Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,709 Battle Record: 9-12 Rep Power: 4997617	yo this was a dope battle. my favorite I've read this week so far, i'm not gunna quote either of your pieces because they were both dope to me. however I will point out that I felt more emotion in breathless' piece and more control in mr. j's.. I don't know if anyone else caught what you did Mr. J but I did. bravo on the basketball talk throughout the verse. seeing as how this is "creative writing" that helped to win me over as I love shit like that. truly the hardest decision I made out of the 3 battles I voted on, that's why I hit this last. anyways mvgt- Mr. J __________________