Utopian Society

Dove Dozer · 09-12-2013, 04:38 PM

my utopian society, each person is there own variety..
I write a free with absolutely no one biting me..
but if we hurt, we still bleed from the cut..
money isnt needed as much, and none of the people are judged..

no ladies are raped and left with a rapists seed and no love..
I hate to see em get fucked, and left on the street with a cut deep in the gut..
everyone will respect eachother equally, y'all is unique you see..
there'll be no such thing as weak emcees..
no outcasting, based on the color of skin you be..
live on an exotic beach with beautifull scenery..
we could flee, to where ever we want without an invitation..
live however we please with freedom of descrimination..
this is a nation free from racists, which is keepin us down..
each person in they own domain will be the king with the crown..
freedom is found, in the heart and soul of you..
you'll have no trouble in life as long as your only true..
only do, things to others as you'd have done to yourself..
never do somthing to heavy to carry under your belt..
blunders will be stomachfelt, dont let limitations limit you..
put your mind to it, Im sure you can do anything you choose..
and if you lose, just keep at it and trying..
its the practice applyin that'll always have you gliding..
never have to be lying, just means you did something your ashamed of..
make sure you love the woman before you make love..

hook 2x
my utopian society, each person is there own variety..
I write a free with absolutely no one biting me..
but if we hurt, we still bleed from the cut..
money isnt needed as much, and none of the people are judged..

kneeling on my knees in the mud, just pondering thoughts..
the weight's on top of me y'all, heavy like a lotto ball about to topple and fall..
I just wish that I could escape with birds..
I just wanna murder the bastard that made up racial slurs..
people say they're words, but its not the meaning, its whats intended..
I'll be damned if I'm standing there sayin Im not offended..
I'll knock em senseless, but in the words of the great man..
they feeding off that anger, so try an stick to your gameplan..
live wild, but also be sensible. why?
because it only takes one mistake to mess up a life..
you could jepardize with just one word a friendship..
and losing a best friend, is just as bad as being friendless..
mouths fulla jealous remarks, they hadda spoke em..
get back at those kids, by excelling, the words of the blackest soultan..
write anger poems, and try your best not to cough the beef out..
and if they wanna step up, be sure that you knock some teeth out..
I've walked the green mile, pavements of racists..
they cant just stay in they places, they wanna get laid in they graves..
utopia is a world eliminating ignorance..
a world eliminating, all of that nigga shit..
I'm spittin this, but I had to face the critiszm..
of comming from text to writen rhythms..
and I was able to look over, all of these bitchin synics..
and pick the mic up, and I'm spittin the biggest vision..

hook 2x
my utopian society, each person is there own variety..
I write a free with absolutely no one biting me..
but if we hurt, we still bleed from the cut..
money isnt needed as much, and none of the people are judged..

outro (talking)

its in the rhythm, listen you'll see what I enjoy to do..
I didnt give up, all I needed was a voice to do..
the verses that I spit, realize what your life is worth..
its a gift that you were given, and the shits a priceless serving..
life is turning for the worse, I see it in your face son..
but once you hit rock bottom, the only way you go is straight up..
be wise with decisions, your life is a vision..
talk about problems but make sure your not always cryin and bitchin..
my rhyme and my rhythm, is what I've made of my gift..
make sure it gets remembered when I'm laid in my crib..
the text that I write, will leave a legacy when I die..
and there'll be more to look back on through the rest of my life...

09-12-2013, 04:38 PM	#1
Dove Dozer loose leaf bruce lee Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,077 Battle Record: 7-6 Rep Power: 1853216	Utopian Society my utopian society, each person is there own variety.. I write a free with absolutely no one biting me.. but if we hurt, we still bleed from the cut.. money isnt needed as much, and none of the people are judged.. no ladies are raped and left with a rapists seed and no love.. I hate to see em get fucked, and left on the street with a cut deep in the gut.. everyone will respect eachother equally, y'all is unique you see.. there'll be no such thing as weak emcees.. no outcasting, based on the color of skin you be.. live on an exotic beach with beautifull scenery.. we could flee, to where ever we want without an invitation.. live however we please with freedom of descrimination.. this is a nation free from racists, which is keepin us down.. each person in they own domain will be the king with the crown.. freedom is found, in the heart and soul of you.. you'll have no trouble in life as long as your only true.. only do, things to others as you'd have done to yourself.. never do somthing to heavy to carry under your belt.. blunders will be stomachfelt, dont let limitations limit you.. put your mind to it, Im sure you can do anything you choose.. and if you lose, just keep at it and trying.. its the practice applyin that'll always have you gliding.. never have to be lying, just means you did something your ashamed of.. make sure you love the woman before you make love.. hook 2x my utopian society, each person is there own variety.. I write a free with absolutely no one biting me.. but if we hurt, we still bleed from the cut.. money isnt needed as much, and none of the people are judged.. kneeling on my knees in the mud, just pondering thoughts.. the weight's on top of me y'all, heavy like a lotto ball about to topple and fall.. I just wish that I could escape with birds.. I just wanna murder the bastard that made up racial slurs.. people say they're words, but its not the meaning, its whats intended.. I'll be damned if I'm standing there sayin Im not offended.. I'll knock em senseless, but in the words of the great man.. they feeding off that anger, so try an stick to your gameplan.. live wild, but also be sensible. why? because it only takes one mistake to mess up a life.. you could jepardize with just one word a friendship.. and losing a best friend, is just as bad as being friendless.. mouths fulla jealous remarks, they hadda spoke em.. get back at those kids, by excelling, the words of the blackest soultan.. write anger poems, and try your best not to cough the beef out.. and if they wanna step up, be sure that you knock some teeth out.. I've walked the green mile, pavements of racists.. they cant just stay in they places, they wanna get laid in they graves.. utopia is a world eliminating ignorance.. a world eliminating, all of that nigga shit.. I'm spittin this, but I had to face the critiszm.. of comming from text to writen rhythms.. and I was able to look over, all of these bitchin synics.. and pick the mic up, and I'm spittin the biggest vision.. hook 2x my utopian society, each person is there own variety.. I write a free with absolutely no one biting me.. but if we hurt, we still bleed from the cut.. money isnt needed as much, and none of the people are judged.. outro (talking) its in the rhythm, listen you'll see what I enjoy to do.. I didnt give up, all I needed was a voice to do.. the verses that I spit, realize what your life is worth.. its a gift that you were given, and the shits a priceless serving.. life is turning for the worse, I see it in your face son.. but once you hit rock bottom, the only way you go is straight up.. be wise with decisions, your life is a vision.. talk about problems but make sure your not always cryin and bitchin.. my rhyme and my rhythm, is what I've made of my gift.. make sure it gets remembered when I'm laid in my crib.. the text that I write, will leave a legacy when I die.. and there'll be more to look back on through the rest of my life... __________________ Last edited by Dove Dozer; 09-17-2013 at 07:46 PM.