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Old 08-06-2013, 11:54 AM   #12
Kold Breeze
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This composition spoke volumes to me. Because of my shitty phone, I cant get too in depth with my review, But I must say that the beginning -


'I write to you today my friends
To say I feel I'm at the end.
Do not cry at my demise,
I accept my fate,
I will not hide.'

Had me hooked from jumpstreet, lol. The other part that had me hooked was-

'Now I claim just two children of my own, my beautiful daughter and son.
I was baptized a Christian under water (and rum too)
I learned to beat my inner demons without help (from sun tzu)
standing at the precipice and spitting off the edge of it,
ignoring all the negatives till I blamed myself for negligence.'

I really relate to this so, this had me stukk.

A great verse overall, I think. Keep it up....
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