Writers Challenge League - "Midgets"

Geno · 08-02-2013, 09:44 PM

good shit, i unlike your first respone guy, am not into the lead on style you have... whereas.. your first line ends abruptly and leads into the other. i feel you could do so much more if you verntured outside of that, could just be me and the way i read it though? iono. but otherwise. this was dope, good take on midgets. had some great visuals tbh. some things vividly going on that i really dug. depth for sure. are you under an alias, and if so -who the fuck did you used to be? and why would you use nwl under your name and above your avy. i dont get it

08-02-2013, 09:44 PM	#4
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	good shit, i unlike your first respone guy, am not into the lead on style you have... whereas.. your first line ends abruptly and leads into the other. i feel you could do so much more if you verntured outside of that, could just be me and the way i read it though? iono. but otherwise. this was dope, good take on midgets. had some great visuals tbh. some things vividly going on that i really dug. depth for sure. are you under an alias, and if so -who the fuck did you used to be? and why would you use nwl under your name and above your avy. i dont get it __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est* Last edited by Geno; 08-02-2013 at 10:53 PM.