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07-21-2013, 11:30 AM
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ghost in the matrix
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Nice lil drop here, appreciate the approach and the metaphorical take and that you were able to keep on the topic. The lines themselves were a Tad short for me and really kept the flow simple compared to my personal preference but to each is own. Solid drop here stay around and keep droppin
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