Pyro vs ...the Munster - MUNSTER WINS BY KO

[Animosi T]

Originally Posted by Pyro

Give me your Max cause this is indeed a hard drive, his rhymes war & break
when i crash, dumb he feels cause everything he ride for is fake!

This was wack. You want to go with a set-up/punch-aka Joke. Talk about past battles/pictures of him/etc. Make it funny. This verse made no sense-wording is crucial.

his lines are bitten from scripts so he like "My Pix'ar dope" in that bordered Box he Stood
Slip a Link into Munster's Ink and he get to thinking he's HollyWood!

Again, no real punch. No reaction was given from me. I saw the concept, you could thought of monster Ink, and made a reference to it that was more indepth. It really made no sense calling him 'Hollywood'

I Trade Marks then drain hearts, remaining pain attack this boys Guilt
your not Stable to Vets, tm's only labeled a threat ona back of spoiled milk

This was a semi-punch. You want to strive for lines like this. It's a joke, in a sense, and you want to insult the opponent.

I'm blocking his Cruelty like What can your Shots.... do to me?
hes known for getting Beamed in battles so he's used to having dots to his 'T'ee!

Gun lines are wack fillers. Concept here was worded badly, you want to make a good set up and punch. lead up to the joke. Look at some comedian's best punchlines/great battles.

His Vass get shattered and this Man Dies, he's not Eligable to see my Grand Prize
After this bout if he Survive 'i'ce skate on his Grounds cause he knew it was a Land Slide!

No, this wasn't a good punch. If he survived, that would be a win. bad wording/no real punch.


Die bitch nigga...

Munster got this but I will break down Pyro's to help him.

Pyro, work on crafting punches. Do some research so you don't use all fillers and try to crush your opponent. Look at some battles and look how they craft punches.

mvgt: Munster