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Old 08-10-2022, 10:18 AM   #6
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Sinacog without short line limits is something to see. I fucked with the start, almost like he was setting up like an action story or something but he fell into talking about himself... AJ the Menace making an appearance felt so out of place. If Sinacog built his verse around the picture it could be dope. Like Adverse said, I wanted to see the subjects doing that AJ the Menace shit. Let the characters crack dental next time

Master rock dropped what I'm assuming was a key. Felt clunky at times because the goal was def the end rhyme, but tonally, it fit the picture pretty well. Like, it had a similar pallette if that makes sense?

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