DL round 1 (MMLP vs Timeless)-MMLP WINS

Pharaohs Army · 08-20-2021, 01:28 AM

MMLP:

Buttery flow man. Nice and easy to rap, which is always a plus. Packed a lot of rhymes in this one.

Kind of like Universe's piece I'm a little lost with the plot. (SO maybe the problem is MY reading comprehension). By that I mean, the wicked witch, the widow and the dead husband's grave lost me a bit. But the piece was still enjoyable for me and technically sound.

Timeless:
Good verse. It seems like a verse about addiction but you don't scream and shout addiction; you do it very subtly and with literary devices.

Lost everything. Only left to remember when times were great.
This is a great line and encapsulated the piece.

Good to see you writing again, and the sky is the limit because I know you can do even better. Against a lesser opponent this verse probably takes the W.

But I'm voting MMLP because his flow was the star of the show and overpowered the match here.

That being said I think timeless had a "deeper" piece with a bit more substance. So this was close.

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08-20-2021, 01:28 AM	#9
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	MMLP: Buttery flow man. Nice and easy to rap, which is always a plus. Packed a lot of rhymes in this one. Kind of like Universe's piece I'm a little lost with the plot. (SO maybe the problem is MY reading comprehension). By that I mean, the wicked witch, the widow and the dead husband's grave lost me a bit. But the piece was still enjoyable for me and technically sound. Timeless: Good verse. It seems like a verse about addiction but you don't scream and shout addiction; you do it very subtly and with literary devices. Lost everything. Only left to remember when times were great. This is a great line and encapsulated the piece. Good to see you writing again, and the sky is the limit because I know you can do even better. Against a lesser opponent this verse probably takes the W. But I'm voting MMLP because his flow was the star of the show and overpowered the match here. That being said I think timeless had a "deeper" piece with a bit more substance. So this was close.