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02-04-2019, 12:45 AM
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To me it seems like you sacrificed rhymes for meaning. A shit-ton of rhymes, but not saying much.
You obviously have some talent so I'd rather see you write something more meaningful and impactful even if there weren't quite as many rhymes in it. Others might find it dope; I don't know. Just my opinion. |
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