Krucial Thirteen vs Mr. J - KRUCIAL 13 WINS

[For Battling]

wen i kill u, youll dissapear into the night scene,
youll come up missing without a trace, Prince getting whiped clean.
___alright prince/prints not bad_______________________________________________ _____________
u get a gun, ill grab a knife, lets see who got the best aim,
if Mr. misses, my scalpal give em a sex change.
_scalpal is old wp but this is decent_________________________________________________ _____________
this guy probably cant scrap, and his whole pen game is subpar,
so if he say he greasey wit the hands, its bcuz he cant hang wit these bars.
_____lol I get it but nah_____________________________________________ _____________
30-38? damn, u shouldnt ever start no rap beefs,
u cant erase your terrible record, but u shouldve thrown out your rap sheets.
______thought this was dope tbh____________________________________________ _____________
i hate trolls, so he better not ever let me see him around,
catch this Joker on a dark night witta Bat, beating this Clown.
_____ehh nah_____________________________________________ _____________
this boy gone need a doctor to check his heart,
Death by Quartering,
J will be separated into 4 corners like the Jack in a deck of cards.
____i mean...every card has the number or letter in each corner right? Lol that’s takes away a lot of impact from the punch because it doesn’t make the J special at all______________________________________________ _____________
twitter fingers, wit any beef i aint fuckin around,
all that hashtagging will have me out front wit the pound.
______alright cool, could have been done better & less simpler but not bad____________________________________________ _____________
fire rounds,
dome shot, paint his head red, watch this clown die...
naw, Heath Ledger, now he can Die A clown.
same as above, cool concept but done in an extremely simplistic way, gotta make the bar more fulfilling

Vs


Boy my style is that Yeah Pie, yours is looking like Bukkake.
I stuff peaches & cherries, while there are layers to you getting frosted fruitcake
bukkake and frosted fruitcake rhyme? Gtfo
pussy come get ya tubes laced or play the wall like a dental dam
ya whole future is spermicide from the occasional circle jerk sense of fam.
nah
ya whole rhyme scheme is fucked & ya lines are wack as shit...we know.
truth is only time someone will call you commercial, is to show the benefits of cannabis on chemo.
nah
this toy will bring that talk to an end, so stop thinking you acting real.
one peep and Ill knock off that top with Ms & crack you open like a Happy Meal.
this was better but barely decent
now get outta here kid, or you can see what this style does.
you dont have the connection to land lines you always getting tuned out like dial up
better than the last, now we’re getting somewhere.
I could grab the tool & spark & leave this sucker heated like a blacksmith
problem is you used to getting led on, ya whole career is basically being cat-fished
cool

MR J is getting better still, he’s managed to form actual punches but the concept need to improve. Krucial please never use that structure in ur verse ever again lol. You had good concepts and a good number of your lines hit but you have to do a better job at making a punch “whole”

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