Week 7: Adverse vs. Breathless (ADVERSE WINS 10-0 SHUTOUT)

Just Write · 04-18-2016, 12:36 AM

Well, this was kinda one sided... I expected more from this battle tbh.

Adverse, thought you started out a lot smoother then you ended. Just about before you got to the second day it became a bit choppy but you eventually recovered. I also like how you ended it with the zoloft and ritalin, nice touch. Overall I enjoyed your drop

Breathless.. man you could have taken this had you tried a bit harder, lots of good little tidbits in there, I liked the cookie cutter line the most. Hopefully next week you'll get some motivation back.

Mvgt = Adverse

04-18-2016, 12:36 AM	#3
Just Write Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,709 Battle Record: 9-12 Rep Power: 4997617	Well, this was kinda one sided... I expected more from this battle tbh. Adverse, thought you started out a lot smoother then you ended. Just about before you got to the second day it became a bit choppy but you eventually recovered. I also like how you ended it with the zoloft and ritalin, nice touch. Overall I enjoyed your drop Breathless.. man you could have taken this had you tried a bit harder, lots of good little tidbits in there, I liked the cookie cutter line the most. Hopefully next week you'll get some motivation back. Mvgt = Adverse __________________

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