Week 2: Symetrik vs. Echo (ECHO WINS 6-3)

[Just Write]

Lol I enjoyed both pieces,

Symetrik,
A tale of drug binges, loss of a baby, deception and anger.. took me a couple of reads to catch onto what we ALL so delicately express as "flow", but once I did this was nice, the middle threw me a bit right around the truck stop line. I didn't understand that section very well which kind of left me underwhelmed, first verse was fire though and the twist ending was nicely done.


Echo,
Yeehaa cowboy... a country-eske bonnie and Clydes tale
I really enjoyed this piece, you did a very good job of getting into character and you definitely put me in a western feel, so much so I want to go out and buy a ten gallon hat, some chewing tobacco and a piece of straw to chew on while kicking up my feet on my balcony while shooting beer bottles off a log in my backyard with a six shooter... nah but for serious this was a nice piece. I very much enjoyed it, the pa always told me it was good manners to choke bit did it for me...

Mvgt=echo.... while these were both great reads by unexpected candidates (haven't read from either) probably botw here I found echo's slightly more enjoyable although it was very close.. great fucking match