AOWL Week 10: Mike Wrecka (5-4) VS. Nigma (4-3) [NIGMA WINS, 8-2.]

Vulgar · 04-28-2013, 08:24 PM

Nigma - This was an upbeat, socially lucrative synopsis of how relationships can be in the present society, from misunderstandings to ranting through texts, and from my interpretation, you lay it on us that this man-to-woman dilemma boxes us in but having a plan is better than planning for the worst turnout. I thought it was nicely done; the highlight was the flow especially. Dynamic.

Mike Wrecka - As soon as you mentioned 'short arms' it shot an image of a T-Rex into my brain, but that isn't to say it took away from the twist you chose. Fresh take. The writing was self explanatory, meaning it was a good tale as a whole. I did walk away a little hungry afterwards though. I feel like more personal touch could've been added to the piece. Some zest, some signature Mike Wrecka T-Rex remains. Just my opinion.

My vote goes to Nigma.

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04-28-2013, 08:24 PM	#20
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604320	Nigma - This was an upbeat, socially lucrative synopsis of how relationships can be in the present society, from misunderstandings to ranting through texts, and from my interpretation, you lay it on us that this man-to-woman dilemma boxes us in but having a plan is better than planning for the worst turnout. I thought it was nicely done; the highlight was the flow especially. Dynamic. Mike Wrecka - As soon as you mentioned 'short arms' it shot an image of a T-Rex into my brain, but that isn't to say it took away from the twist you chose. Fresh take. The writing was self explanatory, meaning it was a good tale as a whole. I did walk away a little hungry afterwards though. I feel like more personal touch could've been added to the piece. Some zest, some signature Mike Wrecka T-Rex remains. Just my opinion. My vote goes to Nigma.