Broken minded

fathead · 04-19-2013, 07:23 PM

My brain contains all the worlds pain, this is called a paradox..
My veins contain all worlds evils, dare you cut open pandoras box?

This One Here Is My Favorite It Has Perfect Flow And The Pandora Box Metaphor Was Cool And Fit The Tone.

Bathe in innocence and childrens ligaments, then wash myself in soap.
My wickedness is magnificent, you'll struggle to swallow it n you'll choke!

This One Actually ComeS In A Close Second BecauseIithas Perfect WordinG And Great Flow. Also This IsA Pretty Original Idea Which Definatley Gets Shock Value.

So kid, if you wanna hang with me, make sure you read what I wrote,
Use you head, cus to hang with me, is to hang yourself with rope!

This Is An Example Of One I Dont Like, Its Not Bad But It Seems The Flow Doesnt Live Up Too ThE Rest Of The Piece. It Also Seems Toned Down By far Compared Too The Rest.

But Ive Actually Never Really Been On A Site Like This So It Musta Been Another Fathead. I Just Picked It Cuz Its What People Ive Known Called Me My Whole Life.

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04-19-2013, 07:23 PM	#21
fathead Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: cresson, PA Posts: 30 Battle Record: 1-3 Rep Power: 38	My brain contains all the worlds pain, this is called a paradox.. My veins contain all worlds evils, dare you cut open pandoras box? This One Here Is My Favorite It Has Perfect Flow And The Pandora Box Metaphor Was Cool And Fit The Tone. Bathe in innocence and childrens ligaments, then wash myself in soap. My wickedness is magnificent, you'll struggle to swallow it n you'll choke! This One Actually ComeS In A Close Second BecauseIithas Perfect WordinG And Great Flow. Also This IsA Pretty Original Idea Which Definatley Gets Shock Value. So kid, if you wanna hang with me, make sure you read what I wrote, Use you head, cus to hang with me, is to hang yourself with rope! This Is An Example Of One I Dont Like, Its Not Bad But It Seems The Flow Doesnt Live Up Too ThE Rest Of The Piece. It Also Seems Toned Down By far Compared Too The Rest. But Ive Actually Never Really Been On A Site Like This So It Musta Been Another Fathead. I Just Picked It Cuz Its What People Ive Known Called Me My Whole Life.