AOWL Week 7: c.d.m. (2-4) vs. Ink (2-1) [INK WINS, 7-5.]

Frank · 04-02-2013, 05:15 PM

Veritas - Verse had all the elements - left no stone unturned. This was sweeping saga lol. You swept the dirt from under the rug. I am unaware of some of the shit you spoke of; you dropped knowledge with this one. You had a Krs 1 Cadence. Preachy educational whos your daddy - Big brother would be proud.

Ink - The personifier. First time you centered your verse and it doesn't work for you on this piece. I have high expectations of centered verses. Was this centered to make up for lack of?

My votes goes to c.d.m for a serious school session

04-02-2013, 05:15 PM	#13
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853347	Veritas - Verse had all the elements - left no stone unturned. This was sweeping saga lol. You swept the dirt from under the rug. I am unaware of some of the shit you spoke of; you dropped knowledge with this one. You had a Krs 1 Cadence. Preachy educational whos your daddy - Big brother would be proud. Ink - The personifier. First time you centered your verse and it doesn't work for you on this piece. I have high expectations of centered verses. Was this centered to make up for lack of? My votes goes to c.d.m for a serious school session __________________ *VETWORK*

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