Skullkid -- Elysium

H4ZE · 07-22-2014, 02:43 PM

This was sick guys.

First verse, very great wording choice, that really helped up the imagery and get the message of the topic across, this verse really got me thinking about shit, you had to think to decipher it, I'm not to experienced with rap so I'm now where near this level of writing so I can't reqlly say much other than the flow was nice, rhyme schemes were nice as well and the imagery was great.

Verse 2, this was more straight forward, closer was great. Your imagery was really great due to the way you choose your words, every piece I've read from you is great and this was no exception. The way you write is amazing. Flow and schemes were great as well in this, everything rolled off the tounge smoothly when I read it aloud, dope shit.

Overall, Great work from you both, you both had great imagery, flow and rhyme schemes. Dope collab here guys.
Keep writing and stay blessed. Peace.

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07-22-2014, 02:43 PM	#20
H4ZE Member Join Date: Jan 2014 Location: Florida Posts: 77 Battle Record: 1-2 Rep Power: 0	This was sick guys. First verse, very great wording choice, that really helped up the imagery and get the message of the topic across, this verse really got me thinking about shit, you had to think to decipher it, I'm not to experienced with rap so I'm now where near this level of writing so I can't reqlly say much other than the flow was nice, rhyme schemes were nice as well and the imagery was great. Verse 2, this was more straight forward, closer was great. Your imagery was really great due to the way you choose your words, every piece I've read from you is great and this was no exception. The way you write is amazing. Flow and schemes were great as well in this, everything rolled off the tounge smoothly when I read it aloud, dope shit. Overall, Great work from you both, you both had great imagery, flow and rhyme schemes. Dope collab here guys. Keep writing and stay blessed. Peace.