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07-10-2014, 04:53 PM
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It wasn't bad dude. Some bits reminded me of Em when he was good. The first couple lines didn't make sense, one part in particular though after was fckin ridiculously flowy.
Keep it up man. My only advice is try to make it more coherent. Some of it just seems like random rhyming words. |
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