AOWL Week 6: Innovator (2-3) VS. Patrown (1-1) [PATROWN WINS, 6-4.]

Vinzr · 03-25-2013, 09:22 AM

Inno i thought your short verse didnt do you any justice this week, it didnt really have much substance to it tbh. There was no real development throughout and felt like a story that had no real ending. But mechanically it wasnt too bad, some areas might need fixin up tho..seemed like u just rushed the verse this week. Pat u had a nice concept and approach that i was feelin here, executed well and without a doubt took this one.

v/ Patrown

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03-25-2013, 09:22 AM	#9
Vinzr Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 86 Battle Record: 5-5 Rep Power: 137478	Inno i thought your short verse didnt do you any justice this week, it didnt really have much substance to it tbh. There was no real development throughout and felt like a story that had no real ending. But mechanically it wasnt too bad, some areas might need fixin up tho..seemed like u just rushed the verse this week. Pat u had a nice concept and approach that i was feelin here, executed well and without a doubt took this one. v/ Patrown