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dope battle
wayne brady - the flow was awesome. really good rhythm and cadence on display here. the multis were on point. I really enjoyed the twist on the little mermaid. It was really well written and kept my attention through out. dope verse man. really liked the ending. zombie - this was cool. a more traditional topical from the days of yesteryear. had some really interesting and witty phrases and turn of phrases. really liked this part if you ever get caught in a rip current, swim parallel and swim back but maybe I wanna' swim towards the light where fairytales can diffract that kind of writing is very clever. you littered the whole verse with those type of golden nuggets. good job. the flow was lacking in some spots compared to your opponents though overall - I enjoyed wayne bradys more. zombies got a little boring. and brady had the better flow and multis. im going vote - wayne brady thanks for the reads gentlemen
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