I WANT SOMEONE TO BE PROUD OF ME

dead man · 04-19-2014, 09:22 AM

I'm more stable in dreams. Cuz these medics have no talents but to rave with disease so you’re essentially an addict from the cradle to teens. Insanity's present as if it's planning a message for fam-i-lies stressin about this candy digestin. Feed me an anti-depressant so i can get panicky/pleasant, mixed with some manic and restless- i feel it but can i express it?

#proud

started off a bit shaky. i thought you were going do to a NaS - fetus type of joint all from the perspective of the womb but i was relieved when you didn't.

i liked this a lot because you have a personality behind your writing. make more seriously written tracks as opposed to freestyle one-takes and you could have some great music on your hands.

thanks

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04-19-2014, 09:22 AM	#4
dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,485 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606679	I'm more stable in dreams. Cuz these medics have no talents but to rave with disease so you’re essentially an addict from the cradle to teens. Insanity's present as if it's planning a message for fam-i-lies stressin about this candy digestin. Feed me an anti-depressant so i can get panicky/pleasant, mixed with some manic and restless- i feel it but can i express it? #proud started off a bit shaky. i thought you were going do to a NaS - fetus type of joint all from the perspective of the womb but i was relieved when you didn't. i liked this a lot because you have a personality behind your writing. make more seriously written tracks as opposed to freestyle one-takes and you could have some great music on your hands. thanks 1 __________________ Zack Wicks for president

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