Week 3: Vulgar (2-0) vs. Adonis (2-0) \\ Vulgar wins 7-6

e11even · 03-17-2014, 03:00 AM

Adonis- awesome drop. I loved how you structured the fractured thought Throughout. It really gave it the feel it needed given the topic and how you morphed it. I loved your word usage and just the overall gist I drew from this work. Great job.

Vulgar- i think this was kinda cool. I think the rhyming was pretty basic as was the word usage was a Lil stretched imo. Overall good, but not fantastic. Kudos though for this being a fully involved piece. I think I would have liked this more if the internal argument didn't end up as hip as hipocracy in the end. MVGT ADONIS

03-17-2014, 03:00 AM	#16
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	Adonis- awesome drop. I loved how you structured the fractured thought Throughout. It really gave it the feel it needed given the topic and how you morphed it. I loved your word usage and just the overall gist I drew from this work. Great job. Vulgar- i think this was kinda cool. I think the rhyming was pretty basic as was the word usage was a Lil stretched imo. Overall good, but not fantastic. Kudos though for this being a fully involved piece. I think I would have liked this more if the internal argument didn't end up as hip as hipocracy in the end. MVGT ADONIS __________________ Ahem.

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