Duel of the Cosmic Mic

Frank · 10-23-2013, 07:42 PM

diabolical portrait of space battle - added character machine almost threw a wrench in the works but you pushed the boundaries here. from a creativity stand point, with the pictures, and story line, this was one of the more creative pieces I've read in a long time. The actual content was pretty good but the contrast of voices with the different flows was very theatrical.

this kendrick lamar text style could work for you.

10-23-2013, 07:42 PM	#5
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853347	diabolical portrait of space battle - added character machine almost threw a wrench in the works but you pushed the boundaries here. from a creativity stand point, with the pictures, and story line, this was one of the more creative pieces I've read in a long time. The actual content was pretty good but the contrast of voices with the different flows was very theatrical. this kendrick lamar text style could work for you. __________________ *VETWORK*

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