Week 4 - patrown (2-1) vs. Mr. J (2-1) - MR. J WINS 5-0

Just Write · 10-19-2013, 08:29 AM

Sorry for the slacky feed I'm on my phone

Mr j. I liked this piece, very poetic. I did however feel that the rhyme scheme you used got boring and could have used a switch up. Other than that I really enjoyed it.

Patrown this was a sloppy verse. It looks like you may have been rushed this week but this was not up to par with your usual self.

Vote=mr. J

10-19-2013, 08:29 AM	#6
Just Write Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,709 Battle Record: 9-12 Rep Power: 4997617	Sorry for the slacky feed I'm on my phone Mr j. I liked this piece, very poetic. I did however feel that the rhyme scheme you used got boring and could have used a switch up. Other than that I really enjoyed it. Patrown this was a sloppy verse. It looks like you may have been rushed this week but this was not up to par with your usual self. Vote=mr. J __________________

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