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10-15-2013, 12:27 PM
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Godam that opener was fucking ill ass shit yo..fucking a
Thay was a dope display of rhyming right there...the rest of The verse followed suit and carried well with great wording And fluidity. Matter fact ever first line from each stanza could Stand alone...really dug this shit, first time reading...well not really I read thaty clit (anytime a girl says clit, its sexy lol) but that was ok This was outstanding. Great job with this...quick note I thought from The since birth line and on to the end of that first verse...that was some Sick ass wordage and flow....good shit... Bye the way..how do you say badi? Bad-e? Bod-e? Bay-die? Lol just wondering lol |
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