show me an S&F swaggier and flowier than this

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Originally Posted by Seyance

lotta shit didn't work, was forced in.. maybe would rhyme in real life better though. lacked witt and wordplay, plus the wording used didn't feel very natural so the swag factor didn't come through much. quite a few of the "multi syllable rhymes" weren't even multi's as there were words in that didn't rhyme, so it throws the whole multi off.

a few references didn't work, seemed like they were put there to just rhyme. knowing people are idiots and don't actually read verses properly, they just skim and miss it. things like the week old mastiff line, surely a week old mastiff wouldn't have that much adrenalin yet.. as it has only just opened its eyes and probably can't even walk. maybe i'm missing something with that one.

shit was alright yeah, but not thread worthy.. if you want to look at good snf.. go find championship matches. it's like when people ask questions on here and facebook, when googling it would be waaay easier, faster and more accurate.

2c.

your critique was solid until the analogy of google searching

it was waaay easier for me to create this thread than making a fruitless attempt at searching through archives of nothingness yo ;)