#2

Diablo · 12-20-2024, 03:29 AM

losing

consciousness again. not everyone you’ve ever met
wants to be your friend out here, nobody is that special
still rob you if i met you and we spoke for a minute
don’t make a difference to me either way. owe me them digits
or know that you’re finished. small talk push the price up
want some advice chump? if you see me keep your fucking eyes shut
guttersnipe tucking a butterknife under the waist back in the day
fashioned a bladed article from it, making sure the handle was taped
we cut different. must love stitches to stand in my way
every animal caged in the concrete zoo got plans to escape it
we’re trapped in a matrix of modern mesopotamia
everyone hailing from somewhere we didn’t choose. destined for failure
pressing the brakes a second too late before we collide
causing a pile up. only all the survivors already died
caustic inside, rotten throughout. just another body to count
impact meant someone hit the ground and did not even bounce
unstoppable force, soaking up the shock we absorb
product of more than my environment, but improbable fortune
at one with my thoughts. sending a prayer to whoever’s upstairs
kept me prepared, or at least more so than my enemies fared…

Wise Wiggles · 12-20-2024, 04:57 AM

Oh like this. The Mesopotamia line was clutch.
Upstairs line as well.
I like yo shit

PancakeBrah · 12-20-2024, 07:53 AM

Liked this one even more than the other. V smooth, rhyming. caustic inside, rotten throughout, thems the FEELS brotherman.

12-20-2024, 03:29 AM	#1
Diablo Badgerdick Join Date: Jul 2015 Location: Showdown City Posts: 2,633 Battle Record: 11-2 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 22685552	#2 losing consciousness again. not everyone you’ve ever met wants to be your friend out here, nobody is that special still rob you if i met you and we spoke for a minute don’t make a difference to me either way. owe me them digits or know that you’re finished. small talk push the price up want some advice chump? if you see me keep your fucking eyes shut guttersnipe tucking a butterknife under the waist back in the day fashioned a bladed article from it, making sure the handle was taped we cut different. must love stitches to stand in my way every animal caged in the concrete zoo got plans to escape it we’re trapped in a matrix of modern mesopotamia everyone hailing from somewhere we didn’t choose. destined for failure pressing the brakes a second too late before we collide causing a pile up. only all the survivors already died caustic inside, rotten throughout. just another body to count impact meant someone hit the ground and did not even bounce unstoppable force, soaking up the shock we absorb product of more than my environment, but improbable fortune at one with my thoughts. sending a prayer to whoever’s upstairs kept me prepared, or at least more so than my enemies fared… Last edited by Diablo; 12-20-2024 at 05:22 AM.

12-20-2024, 07:53 AM	#3
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	Liked this one even more than the other. V smooth, rhyming. caustic inside, rotten throughout, thems the FEELS brotherman. __________________ Netcees 2025 Revivalist Movement Founder

12-20-2024, 04:57 AM	#2
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,505 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788022	Oh like this. The Mesopotamia line was clutch. Upstairs line as well. I like yo shit __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch"