Meth vs Xnub - {Meth wins}

NBL
Netcees Text Battle League

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Tuesday,
  June 25th, 2013 at 11:59 PM PST.
• Voting ends Friday June 28th at 11:59 PM PST.
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are normally 24 hours
  (unless requested otherwise, that is),
  can be no longer than 36 hours
  and have to be granted by your opponent.

Line Limit:

• Min. = 10 lines
• Max. = 16 lines
• The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both.

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General Rules:

• 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
• 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
• Feeding = DQ.
• Recycling = DQ.
• Biting = DQ.
• No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
• Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
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  means you will disqualified.
• A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged.
• If your opponent doesn't check in,
  you still have to post a verse.
• Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
• If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
  must match the 1st person's line amount.

@Xnub

Keep it at 10, please.

Check and GL.

[Xnub]

check, 10 it is. I'm planning on posting early.

Who the fuck is this faggot?

Let's Dance

I get ladies easy as fuck, and I'm able to always stay up in it
Any of X girlfriends... become one of those in a matter of minutes
My place is an overpopulated city, everyone wants to pit here
But Nubian Desert, with as many friends as people that live there
You smell really bad, you really need to try and start pure
Because your as Fresh as Billy and Lars telling us they are her
You stalking me is mad weird, get near me don't try son
I buy a wallets to keep you away, u don't have enuff money in urs to buy one
I'll throw u in a dumpster faggot, leave u there to bleed in
Fuck a punch this line is filler... Its not like I'll even need ten

[Xnub]

ur a wreck n' yah skills tragic, this fake ain't fit for no belt...
if someone directed u to do a f@ggot, method just act as himself.
..& honestly ur not fly kid. Just a little birdie from the Lou..
you can't help but to ride dick, then wonder why it hurts when u poop.
I wouldn't call em' Larry if this burd ball'd since he more the Cable guy type.
fucking hick can't write nothing that shines, he's like a failed highlight.
every weekend has to call his baby mom collect to make bail by night..
The Hangover is like this geeks guidelines, his tale should be labeled High-Life.
now I'm burying this bitch in his city, but he still hopes ima pardon his pen..
I'm usually not one to judge, meth... but when u write it's like ur breaking everyone of the cardinal sins.

[Sharp]

X girlfriends was cool
Nubian was a cool idea but wording didn't do it for me... Also I think we've been pronouncing it znuhb
Fresh ideas are getting old fast but this was a little different, worked for me since you got it in early
Wallet was alright

V

Really liked the method/meth would idea. Wasn't worked in as smoothly as it could've but that's the kinda stuff that'll do damage
Dickride was Pretty basic for an idea as simple as that
Larry was a stretch and kinda cluttered, prolly woulda been better to dedicate 2 lines to it
Highlight was another good idea but definitely coulda done with 2 lines
Bail was a statement that wasn't actuLly personal
High life coulda been worded a lot better, almost came out as a compliment
Cardinal sins was statementy


Meth had it in quotes 2-1 but xnubs getting somewhere. He should be alright competition next season, definitely keep it up dude

Fir now tho

V/ meth

[Flow]

Originally Posted by Meth

Who the fuck is this faggot?

Let's Dance

I get ladies easy as fuck, and I'm able to always stay up in it
Any of X girlfriends... become one of those in a matter of minutes
lol I just wrote that exact bar pretty much for my battle with him - going to have to hive it to you lol
My place is an overpopulated city, everyone wants to pit here
But Nubian Desert, with as many friends as people that live there
hmm pretty fresh/very creative nice
You smell really bad, you really need to try and start pure
Because your as Fresh as Billy and Lars telling us they are her
lol
You stalking me is mad weird, get near me don't try son
I buy a wallets to keep you away, u don't have enuff money in urs to buy one
solid
I'll throw u in a dumpster faggot, leave u there to bleed in
Fuck a punch this line is filler... Its not like I'll even need ten
everyone loves a cocky prick

Originally Posted by Xnub

ur a wreck n' yah skills tragic, this fake ain't fit for no belt...
if someone directed u to do a f@ggot, method just act as himself.
the whole method act thing was a great concept, just not executed right
..& honestly ur not fly kid. Just a little birdie from the Lou..
you can't help but to ride dick, then wonder why it hurts when u poop.
I hate lines like this - I expect this from an aspiring 10 year old
I wouldn't call em' Larry if this burd ball'd since he more the Cable guy type.
fucking hick can't write nothing that shines, he's like a failed highlight.
mmm its ok - good idea but not a great way of going about it, you have the concepts in mind its now just about really thinking on the best way to word them and deliver them
every weekend has to call his baby mom collect to make bail by night..
The Hangover is like this geeks guidelines, his tale should be labeled High-Life.
lol this was awful sorry
now I'm burying this bitch in his city, but he still hopes ima pardon his pen..
I'm usually not one to judge, meth... but when u write it's like ur breaking everyone of the cardinal sins.
statement and no sting

better showing then I expected - saw some creative concepts from xnub but meth took this easy with a solid example of how 10 lines should look in the league

[Atomic]

I get ladies easy as fuck, and I'm able to always stay up in it
Any of X girlfriends... become one of those in a matter of minutes
lolz, nicely worded.
My place is an overpopulated city, everyone wants to pit here
But Nubian Desert, with as many friends as people that live there
coo
You smell really bad, you really need to try and start pure
Because your as Fresh as Billy and Lars telling us they are her
dece
You stalking me is mad weird, get near me don't try son
I buy a wallets to keep you away, u don't have enuff money in urs to buy one
coo
I'll throw u in a dumpster faggot, leave u there to bleed in
Fuck a punch this line is filler... Its not like I'll even need ten
OOOOOOO SHIT, NIGGA HE THREW AWAY A BAR THIS COCKY LIL NIGGA.

//

ur a wreck n' yah skills tragic, this fake ain't fit for no belt...
if someone directed u to do a f@ggot, method just act as himself.
meh
..& honestly ur not fly kid. Just a little birdie from the Lou..
you can't help but to ride dick, then wonder why it hurts when u poop.
lol wtf.. no
I wouldn't call em' Larry if this burd ball'd since he more the Cable guy type.
fucking hick can't write nothing that shines, he's like a failed highlight.
ok, i see what u were tying but the connection is very poor.
every weekend has to call his baby mom collect to make bail by night..
The Hangover is like this geeks guidelines, his tale should be labeled High-Life.
mehhhh nah man, not hitting
now I'm burying this bitch in his city, but he still hopes ima pardon his pen..
I'm usually not one to judge, meth... but when u write it's like ur breaking everyone of the cardinal sins.
lol okay, not bad, ur best bar by far.

v/ meth. he actually had a very solid verse, besides his last bar of course. xNub, your concepts aren't very hard hitting to begin w/, but ur connections are weird as well. Sometimes it's like ur punch doesn't even connect w/ ur concept whatsoever. Try to read some battles from top battlers so u can attempt to elevate.

good battle guys.

Meth solid showing, n ur first to bars were enough to seal the deal imo, wasn't feeling wallet, fresh is getting played... I had scrapped a line like this bc of that, n closer was just swag lol..

Xnub decent verse u had some alright concepts just executed poorly imo, however the Method acting line was dope, n ur closet was conceptually of but came off still reaching even tho u utilized both lines, the rest just didn't hit or came off statementish

v/ meth