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Old 06-28-2020, 04:10 AM   #1
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Default #newbeat "Conscience" (HipHop X J.Cole Type Beat) (Beat Made By Corleone)

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Old 06-29-2020, 08:34 AM   #2
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I don’t know, man. I couldn’t get into this. There wasn’t really a melody to speak of... but, keep working.
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I don’t know, man. I couldn’t get into this. There wasn’t really a melody to speak of... but, keep working.
for a person who sure knows how to make beats, how could you say there's not a melody in the beat? lol smh.. maybe theirs something wrong with your speakers or something, all jokes aside.. but thanks for the comment

PS, I am from a different era, late 80's.. so I was essentially just taking it back to those roots with this beat. If you listen to groups like "Slum Village" and etc.. you would genuinely know what I am talking about.
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I’m from the same era. And I like Dilla as much as the next man..

Maybe it was the fact I listened on my iPad, but I could only hear two notes and drums. I just wasn’t really feeling it... Old school, minimal beats can be really dope... but, I just wasn’t into this one. No diss involved. Keep at it.
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I like the sample

The way the drums are mixed clash with the sample, imo, and the rhythm on that drum fill works against the hits from the chords

I like keeping things simple, but this could've used another layer at some point. Maybe something subtle like a quiet hat/shaker/tamb pattern midway through?
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