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Exis · 05-04-2020, 10:28 PM

Ayo,

I'm too in the zone, fuck twilight I've improved now I'm grown
Imbued on the stones of rap, 'cause with breakdowns you still lose on your own
Nobody helps you, just fold with the cards I've dealt your net crew
I set trends, & in retrospect you'll see I don't really respect you
I find it too easy to move freely & bruise these noob readings
Eager for a few beatings? Fuck you & your "I'm new" greetings
I chew seedlings, have you wishin' for quick death but I'm no genie
See me, I remove emcees fiendin' for rep
End up on goldmics, repeatin' my best
I'll fuck your bitch up without really needin' the sex
Just feelin' the breasts, peelin' the flesh
Kneelin' on down expectin' me in her neck
I'm not rushin' it's obvious, or I'd be screamin' in Czech
Punched in the face 'til it's gleamin' & wet, blood streamin' in jets
Fuel injection, cruel & reckless
Thugs swingin' the techs
'Til I come outta the dark & watch them fleein' all stressed
As I light up this blunt, & get the full effect of the weed I ingest.

Johnny 6 feet · 05-05-2020, 06:07 AM

Just a good straight brag verse here. The compounds helped it flow smooth and it never dropped off.

"I find it too easy to move freely & bruise these noob readings
Eager for a few beatings? Fuck you & your "I'm new" greetings"

^Lol, yeah, that's why I didn't post one when I joined. Vocab was solid, you covered all the bases topic wise. Nice imagery with:

"I'll fuck your bitch up without really needin' the sex
Just feelin' the breasts, peelin' the flesh
Kneelin' on down expectin' me in her neck
I'm not rushin' it's obvious, or I'd be screamin' in Czech"

This was a short burst of machine gun fire. Right to the point, easy to read. Good work.

Keep on keeping on.

-6

emurgencee · 05-05-2020, 04:33 PM

It was funny. I love the bravado. You got off a little bit of everything with this one, but that flow was crazy. I like your word choice to, mixing it up with a bit of vocab and even common terms to appeal to a broader audience

“I'll fuck your bitch up without really needin' the sex
Just feelin' the breasts, peelin' the flesh
Kneelin' on down expectin' me in her neck
I'm not rushin' it's obvious, or I'd be screamin' in Czech
Punched in the face 'til it's gleamin' & wet, blood streamin' in jets
Fuel injection, cruel & reckless
Thugs swingin' the techs
'Til I come outta the dark & watch them fleein' all stressed
As I light up this blunt, & get the full effect of the weed I “ I fucks with it

Exis · 05-06-2020, 07:12 PM

Gracias my people's...I'll get to all your joints, promise.

05-04-2020, 10:28 PM	#1
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Full Effect... Ayo, I'm too in the zone, fuck twilight I've improved now I'm grown Imbued on the stones of rap, 'cause with breakdowns you still lose on your own Nobody helps you, just fold with the cards I've dealt your net crew I set trends, & in retrospect you'll see I don't really respect you I find it too easy to move freely & bruise these noob readings Eager for a few beatings? Fuck you & your "I'm new" greetings I chew seedlings, have you wishin' for quick death but I'm no genie See me, I remove emcees fiendin' for rep End up on goldmics, repeatin' my best I'll fuck your bitch up without really needin' the sex Just feelin' the breasts, peelin' the flesh Kneelin' on down expectin' me in her neck I'm not rushin' it's obvious, or I'd be screamin' in Czech Punched in the face 'til it's gleamin' & wet, blood streamin' in jets Fuel injection, cruel & reckless Thugs swingin' the techs 'Til I come outta the dark & watch them fleein' all stressed As I light up this blunt, & get the full effect of the weed I ingest.

05-05-2020, 06:07 AM	#2
Johnny 6 feet Storyteller Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 446 Battle Record: 8-4 Champed - Guerrilla Writing League Rep Power: 5558447	Just a good straight brag verse here. The compounds helped it flow smooth and it never dropped off. "I find it too easy to move freely & bruise these noob readings Eager for a few beatings? Fuck you & your "I'm new" greetings" ^Lol, yeah, that's why I didn't post one when I joined. Vocab was solid, you covered all the bases topic wise. Nice imagery with: "I'll fuck your bitch up without really needin' the sex Just feelin' the breasts, peelin' the flesh Kneelin' on down expectin' me in her neck I'm not rushin' it's obvious, or I'd be screamin' in Czech" This was a short burst of machine gun fire. Right to the point, easy to read. Good work. Keep on keeping on. -6

05-05-2020, 04:33 PM	#3
emurgencee Member Join Date: Apr 2020 Posts: 91 Rep Power: 0	It was funny. I love the bravado. You got off a little bit of everything with this one, but that flow was crazy. I like your word choice to, mixing it up with a bit of vocab and even common terms to appeal to a broader audience “I'll fuck your bitch up without really needin' the sex Just feelin' the breasts, peelin' the flesh Kneelin' on down expectin' me in her neck I'm not rushin' it's obvious, or I'd be screamin' in Czech Punched in the face 'til it's gleamin' & wet, blood streamin' in jets Fuel injection, cruel & reckless Thugs swingin' the techs 'Til I come outta the dark & watch them fleein' all stressed As I light up this blunt, & get the full effect of the weed I “ I fucks with it

05-06-2020, 07:12 PM	#4
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Gracias my people's...I'll get to all your joints, promise.