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Old 06-13-2013, 01:39 AM   #1
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Default Just some bars..guess i still got it huh?

Your a sad mistaken prick,that would rather claim the chick
well that BITCH MADE YOU TURN DOWN THE WRONG ROAD, get your NAVIGATION FIXED!

She even scoped my brothers, I left the hoe cock smothered
to the point of NO RETURN and TAPED that ish,cause the whole BLOCK BUST HER!

Well Who needs a hoe? I despise a whole fleet of those
Till that BRANDY made a NIGGA ACT OUT OF CHARACTER, like RAY J IN THE MOESHA SHOW!

I ain't tryna go up state jack, but i'll be real and state facts
The day me and my P.O BOX , they'll have to PICK UP THAT MALE ASAP!

So Don't SOUP a SAYIN' , cause life GOHAN and is a bitch for grown folks
and if you don't know,DENDE 'll have to call the KORIN OR it won't be COOL BEANS once you MISSED THE PO-PO!

I aint a SPANISH JESUS, but best believe im the CHOSEN ONE/JUAN
gotta problem? well if the SHOE FITS, WEAR IT and DON'T HOLD YA TONGUE!

AYE I aint for the bullshit,cause you'll get CROSSED OVER SMALL SHIT
trust ya'll chicks?, WHAT ARE you saying? i wouldn't keep a HOE IN MY HEAD if i was a DOLPHIN!

PLAY your PART cause them ACTORS agree, i ment that with prestige
with that lack of esteem?,your taken AN L CUH, like the FRENCH NATIONAL TEAM!

Bitch,I spit what others don't..look,you can trust it's dope hoods
said Elz's is like MORNING SHIFTS at MARIJUANA SHOPS cause he's UP TO KNOW GOOD!

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Old 06-13-2013, 02:23 AM   #2
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Your a sad mistaken prick,that would rather claim the chick
well that BITCH MADE YOU TURN DOWN THE WRONG ROAD, get your NAVIGATION FIXED!
meh, simple
She even scoped my brothers, I left the hoe cock smothered
to the point of NO RETURN and TAPED that ish,cause the whole BLOCK BUST HER!
haaa, dece
Well Who needs a hoe? I despise a whole fleet of those
Till that BRANDY made a NIGGA ACT OUT OF CHARACTER, like RAY J IN THE MOESHA SHOW!
not feeling it
I ain't tryna go up state jack, but i'll be real and state facts
The day me and my P.O BOX , they'll have to PICK UP THAT MALE ASAP!
dope
So Don't SOUP a SAYIN' , cause life GOHAN and is a bitch for grown folks
and if you don't know,DENDE 'll have to call the KORIN OR it won't be COOL BEANS once you MISSED THE PO-PO!
kinda a stretch
I aint a SPANISH JESUS, but best believe im the CHOSEN ONE/JUAN
gotta problem? well if the SHOE FITS, WEAR IT and DON'T HOLD YA TONGUE!
meh nah
AYE I aint for the bullshit,cause you'll get CROSSED OVER SMALL SHIT
trust ya'll chicks?, WHAT ARE you saying? i wouldn't keep a HOE IN MY HEAD if i was a DOLPHIN!
it's okay
PLAY your PART cause them ACTORS agree, i ment that with prestige
with that lack of esteem?,your taken AN L CUH, like the FRENCH NATIONAL TEAM!
dece
Bitch,I spit what others don't..look,you can trust it's dope hoods
said Elz's is like MORNING SHIFTS at MARIJUANA SHOPS cause he's UP TO KNOW GOOD!
dope
i know you're probably rusty, but this was a nice lil drop. pretty inconsistent but like u said u haven't done it in a while. def. some dope bars tho, glad to see u back sir. now battle someone >:)
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Old 06-13-2013, 04:44 AM   #3
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lmao people still do this?
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Old 06-13-2013, 07:54 AM   #4
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Cool ish joel. Nice to see some text from you.

Not a hugge fan of your audio shit tbh, but really have payed it a whole lot of attention as of late. Any new shit I can peep? Links
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Old 06-13-2013, 02:34 PM   #5
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yeah i got new stuff, im tryna get my mic sent over in north carolina as we speak but i'll be dropping links soon
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Old 06-13-2013, 02:42 PM   #6
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lmao people still do this?
and nah i just did this for fun, you know seeing if you got wordplay and stuff. nothing crazy
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Old 06-13-2013, 04:40 PM   #7
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Yesterday I went up the stairs
I met a man who wasn’t there
He wasn’t there again today
I wish I wish he’d go away

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Old 06-16-2013, 07:40 AM   #8
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you don't have put up links..... anyway, the last bar sound dope, ish.
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Old 06-20-2013, 01:21 PM   #9
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Since when did we not have to put up links??
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