Untold vs Orc - {Orc wins}

The Summer Classic V
The Premier Text Battling Tournament

@Untold @Orc


Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Wednesday,
  June 19th 2013 11:59 PM PST.
• Check Ins are due Sunday, June 16th 2013
• Voting ends Monday 11:59 PM PST.
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are normally 24 hours
  (unless requested otherwise, that is),
  can be no longer than 48 hours
  and have to be granted by your opponent.

Line Limit:

• Min. = 10 lines
• Max. = 16 lines
• The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. If no line agreement is made you CANNOT go above 16 lines

General Rules:

• 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
• 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
• Feeding = DQ.
• Recycling = DQ.
• Biting = DQ.
• No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
• Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
  linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
  means you will disqualified.
• A check in IS mandatory.
• Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
• If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
  must match the 1st person's line amount.

[Untold]

What's up

[Orc]

Untold

orc gang bangin? this lames fakin! homie just bow down
only time you've seen a True Blood was watching the season premier with all ur gal pals
fuckin shook? ya ugly looks r known for harming creatures
funny u bring up BeautifulPeople, cuz ur face reminds me of Marilyn Manson's charming features
broke, irish, n short=a leprechaun wit no treaure n no damn respect
but if u have a pot-o-gold @ the end of a rainbow, its to meet dudes in for random sex
ors a genuine gay wit feminine ways whose neck im a stand on
i must say ur pretty clutch.. is a great place to put ur lipstick, nail polish n tampons
im near certain ur Adam Levine, the queer version. so i'm not relating
anytime someone hear's The Voice of Orc, that show dramatically drops in ratings
along wit the same topic, u stay toxic n lost all of ur sanity
now Orc'll Usher in a new level of fagg0try by jackin off to him in all of his fantasies
around the globe im poundin hoes. Orc pimpin? ya lyin, fam
cuz i've yet to meet a bitch that Newark, from New Jersey all the way to Ireland
u love to flip concepts. bitch ya dishonest. I spit game
Orc Steels ideas so much, Superman's in talks with DC comics to change his nickname

Orc

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You only fuck dirty hoes. Syphillis ain't touching me
Ironic dude never hada Kleenex but always needs those when they up & leave
U came back like 'ayo Burd, you realll tight w/ the rapping'
Pfft. Untold been hanging off O Pair for so long his Nanny gone file for Harrasment
Bring the ruckus then wack dude, you aint bustin the gat fool
One hit will leave you Farah way <- & it's ironic you get fucked in the ass too
No kids- so I pull out then sleep w/ girls perfect at stroking heads
If YOU Pull Out then Sleep.. it's after you make up your Convertible Sofa Bed
I'll faacking come round ya Hood, & if you roused then good
Then you'll be 'seeing enuff Flashing Lights' to initiate a Thousand Bloods
Fucka LDB ya whole team is mine.. & you'll be leaving blind
1hit & we'll see an 'Ugly Face Plant' that'd have Poison Ivy's costume redesigned
Ya girl only fuck ya w/ lights OFF so now u angry and bitter
Untold been mad as fuck ever since Daylyt & Naked startd trending on Twitter
It's awful the shit he pen, now Demo got me offin' this kid again
Dudes verse got me starting w/ a lmao & ending in roflzz & i ain't talking no billy12

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[Dominate]

orc gang bangin? this lames fakin! homie just bow down
only time you've seen a True Blood was watching the season premier with all ur gal pals
cool, not bad
fuckin shook? ya ugly looks r known for harming creatures
funny u bring up BeautifulPeople, cuz ur face reminds me of Marilyn Manson's charming features
OK personal. Would have been stronger if he was voted 'out' on that site... maybe a different flip would've worked better
broke, irish, n short=a leprechaun wit no treaure n no damn respect
but if u have a pot-o-gold @ the end of a rainbow, its to meet dudes in for random sex
Nah. Irish--> leprechaun ---> pot of gold end of rainbow connection is fine, but the flip was silly. How u gonna have sex in a pot of gold.
ors a genuine gay wit feminine ways whose neck im a stand on
i must say ur pretty clutch.. is a great place to put ur lipstick, nail polish n tampons
heh, cool. I haven't heard that use of clutch before though, had to look it up
im near certain ur Adam Levine, the queer version. so i'm not relating
anytime someone hear's The Voice of Orc, that show dramatically drops in ratings
nah. wp too simple and punch wasn't strong enough to compensate
along wit the same topic, u stay toxic n lost all of ur sanity
now Orc'll Usher in a new level of fagg0try by jackin off to him in all of his fantasies
seen the wp before. worded well, though
around the globe im poundin hoes. Orc pimpin? ya lyin, fam
cuz i've yet to meet a bitch that Newark, from New Jersey all the way to Ireland
dope! I'm pretty sure that's an original np, I def haven't seen it before and I've boarded w/ Orc for a long time. Flipped with a good punch. Best line of your verse easy. Well done
u love to flip concepts. bitch ya dishonest. I spit game
Orc Steels ideas so much, Superman's in talks with DC comics to change his nickname
ehhhhhh nah. Wp is old, current event (man of steel) helped a little... but that personal can't stand on its own anymore bc it's old - needs to be something else dope about the bar like a good wp for it to still work



vs



You only fuck dirty hoes. Syphillis ain't touching me
Ironic dude never hada Kleenex but always needs those when they up & leave
ha. dope. Rare to find a wp like this that hasn't been done before. good flip/punch/wording
U came back like 'ayo Burd, you realll tight w/ the rapping'
Pfft. Untold been hanging off O Pair for so long his Nanny gone file for Harrasment
good for a self nameplay... not bad
Bring the ruckus then wack dude, you aint bustin the gat fool
One hit will leave you Farah way <- & it's ironic you get fucked in the ass too
had to look up. OK line. simple wp... 'you're gay' punch usually needs something mroe to be dope...
No kids- so I pull out then sleep w/ girls perfect at stroking heads
If YOU Pull Out then Sleep.. it's after you make up your Convertible Sofa Bed
haha, cool. Good/funny punch
I'll faacking come round ya Hood, & if you roused then good
Then you'll be 'seeing enuff Flashing Lights' to initiate a Thousand Bloods
rhyme is a bit of a stretch for me here. Already saw someone else do this flash/bloods initiation thing this round... not the exact same concept but still wasn't fresh to me
Fucka LDB ya whole team is mine.. & you'll be leaving blind
1hit & we'll see an 'Ugly Face Plant' that'd have Poison Ivy's costume redesigned
cool, like the wp...
Ya girl only fuck ya w/ lights OFF so now u angry and bitter
Untold been mad as fuck ever since Daylyt & Naked startd trending on Twitter
lol cool
It's awful the shit he pen, now Demo got me offin' this kid again
Dudes verse got me starting w/ a lmao & ending in roflzz & i ain't talking no billy12
concept is cool, kinda funny, but this didn't rhyme AT ALL for me dude... it's billy12 not billy10 lol...seemed like u rushed this



best lines of the battle were newark, kleenex & convertible sofa bed... after that orc had more bars that were cool/OK - untold had a couple more/worse misses. Enjoyed both verses though. Good job fellas



v/ Orc

[Untold]

Ayo, hate to do this, but to clarify. A Pot-O-Gold is a brand of port-a-potty. I dunno, just thought that might go over some peeps heads.

[Dominate]

Thought I might have missed something... I did google "pot-o-gold" though & got nothing explanatory. Makes it closer & that line not a miss, but still got Orc

[Atomic]

Untold

orc gang bangin? this lames fakin! homie just bow down
only time you've seen a True Blood was watching the season premier with all ur gal pals
lmao, not bad
fuckin shook? ya ugly looks r known for harming creatures
funny u bring up BeautifulPeople, cuz ur face reminds me of Marilyn Manson's charming features
lolwtf, idk man not feeling
broke, irish, n short=a leprechaun wit no treaure n no damn respect
but if u have a pot-o-gold @ the end of a rainbow, its to meet dudes in for random sex
lmaoooooo, dece/funny
ors a genuine gay wit feminine ways whose neck im a stand on
i must say ur pretty clutch.. is a great place to put ur lipstick, nail polish n tampons
hahaha feeling it.
im near certain ur Adam Levine, the queer version. so i'm not relating
anytime someone hear's The Voice of Orc, that show dramatically drops in ratings
rofl, coo
along wit the same topic, u stay toxic n lost all of ur sanity
now Orc'll Usher in a new level of fagg0try by jackin off to him in all of his fantasies
mehhhhhh, not feeling
around the globe im poundin hoes. Orc pimpin? ya lyin, fam
cuz i've yet to meet a bitch that Newark, from New Jersey all the way to Ireland
coo
u love to flip concepts. bitch ya dishonest. I spit game
Orc Steels ideas so much, Superman's in talks with DC comics to change his nickname
haha, aight

Orc

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You only fuck dirty hoes. Syphillis ain't touching me
Ironic dude never hada Kleenex but always needs those when they up & leave
cool but a clean Ex? lol who would ever say that. either way i still like the wordplay.
U came back like 'ayo Burd, you realll tight w/ the rapping'
Pfft. Untold been hanging off O Pair for so long his Nanny gone file for Harrasment
roflll, dece
Bring the ruckus then wack dude, you aint bustin the gat fool
One hit will leave you Farah way <- & it's ironic you get fucked in the ass too
haha, coo
No kids- so I pull out then sleep w/ girls perfect at stroking heads
If YOU Pull Out then Sleep.. it's after you make up your Convertible Sofa Bed
mehhhh, it's okay
I'll faacking come round ya Hood, & if you roused then good
Then you'll be 'seeing enuff Flashing Lights' to initiate a Thousand Bloods
ehhh, not feeling it
Fucka LDB ya whole team is mine.. & you'll be leaving blind
1hit & we'll see an 'Ugly Face Plant' that'd have Poison Ivy's costume redesigned
wtf, irrelevant, not good imo
Ya girl only fuck ya w/ lights OFF so now u angry and bitter
Untold been mad as fuck ever since Daylyt & Naked startd trending on Twitter
haha, coo
It's awful the shit he pen, now Demo got me offin' this kid again
Dudes verse got me starting w/ a lmao & ending in roflzz & i ain't talking no billy12
doesn't rhyme, the concept is mad lazy aswell.

untold had like 2 misses, orc had more then that, i also felt untold had lotb w/ the clutch shit. very original. overall untolds verse was just better imo. v/ untold. good battle tho guys, i liked both verses.

[Frank]

untold

along wit the same topic, u stay toxic n lost all of ur sanity
now Orc'll Usher in a new level of fagg0try by jackin off to him in all of his fantasies
around the globe im poundin hoes. Orc pimpin? ya lyin, fam
cuz i've yet to meet a bitch that Newark, from New Jersey all the way to Ireland

vs

orc

You only fuck dirty hoes. Syphillis ain't touching me
Ironic dude never hada Kleenex but always needs those when they up & leave
Fucka LDB ya whole team is mine.. & you'll be leaving blind
1hit & we'll see an 'Ugly Face Plant' that'd have Poison Ivy's costume redesigned
It's awful the shit he pen, now Demo got me offin' this kid again
Dudes verse got me starting w/ a lmao & ending in roflzz & i ain't talking no billy12

vote goes to orc

[Sharp]

orc gang bangin? this lames fakin! homie just bow down
only time you've seen a True Blood was watching the season premier with all ur gal pals
ors a genuine gay wit feminine ways whose neck im a stand on
i must say ur pretty clutch.. is a great place to put ur lipstick, nail polish n tampons
around the globe im poundin hoes. Orc pimpin? ya lyin, fam
cuz i've yet to meet a bitch that Newark, from New Jersey all the way to Ireland


You only fuck dirty hoes. Syphillis ain't touching me
Ironic dude never hada Kleenex but always needs those when they up & leave
U came back like 'ayo Burd, you realll tight w/ the rapping'
Pfft. Untold been hanging off O Pair for so long his Nanny gone file for Harrasment
No kids- so I pull out then sleep w/ girls perfect at stroking heads
If YOU Pull Out then Sleep.. it's after you make up your Convertible Sofa Bed
Fucka LDB ya whole team is mine.. & you'll be leaving blind
1hit & we'll see an 'Ugly Face Plant' that'd have Poison Ivy's costume redesigned


cool battle. i got orc with a more consistent verse, stronger non-quoted lines and the lotb. just outdid untold imo. good shit to both tho

v/ orc

[Cashius]

Clutch was ok. Newark was a bit forced but ok.

Vs.

Kleenex, pull out, daylyt

Untold could be good of he stays at it. Orc was just better.

Orc.

[ill nik-A]

Wow surprised by untold it's just that Orc has the advantage here Kleenex was funny to me

V Orc