Week 1: Blas vs Pharaohs Army BLAS WINS

Flow · 03-18-2019, 10:37 AM

Week One

You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the thread.

DUE THURSDAY

@Blas
@Pharaohs Army

*The 1-2 league and it's mini LR league are one bar Vs one bar.*

Blas · 03-18-2019, 07:03 PM

u dropping wordplay or a meta? who cares nobodies buying what they see
cuz anytime FairWays his options it's always ending with a 9-iron to the tee

Pharaohs Army · 03-19-2019, 06:12 PM

what's it gonna take for this dude to Have respect
i've got an idea- i'll Blas the tech at this bastard's neck

Kill Spree · 03-19-2019, 07:47 PM

Pharoahs bar was a bit to basic of a generic at that... Blas had a cool nameplay wasn’t that harsh but creative

V/blas

Incredible · 03-19-2019, 09:24 PM

Well uh PA need more here for sure and by that I don't just mean more words not about that, just more content was too basic, try reading between the lines type of shit and flip it into a bar. Got Blas taking this, tie in was nice, name play kind eh, but was enough to get the job done. Vote = Blas

zelti · 03-19-2019, 09:44 PM

Blas - pretty cool punch here, haven’t seen this wp used on him before, so it was nice and fresh. No complaints here

Pharoh - I liked the direction you were trying to take but it was just too simple to really hit. Definitely don’t over complicate your bars but you Gotta make them more meaningful

Vote Blas

Real Spit · 03-19-2019, 10:54 PM

Even though Blas' punch is a worse version of a punch I dropped years ago it's better than Pharaoh's by a long shot. Come on Pharaoh a name play gotta have some wit/concept to it, that was just lazy.

v/ Blas

Flow · 03-19-2019, 11:07 PM

Blas. This was ok

PA - get your idea but you need to be more creative with your execution. This was obvious to me from the get go and too simple.

Vote blas

Maximus · 03-20-2019, 05:09 AM

i got Blas taking this here, just a better execution. PA had a good concept but the execution was poor and it fell flat, didnt hit as it ought to

Lenox · 03-20-2019, 11:06 AM

Blas, nice connection wp. Wasn’t a fan of the execution tho with 9 iron. Decent gun bar nonetheless

Pharaoh I wasn’t feeling this man. Gotta get more creative

BLAS

DynamiCz · 03-20-2019, 01:23 PM

u dropping wordplay or a meta? who cares nobodies buying what they see
cuz anytime FairWays his options it's always ending with a 9-iron to the tee

Nice wordplay here, wording was on point as well. Overall executed just right to take the W

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what's it gonna take for this dude to Have respect
i've got an idea- i'll Blas the tech at this bastard's neck

Got to get creative fam, to statement-ish and no punch really executed

V-Blas

Barcotic · 03-20-2019, 01:56 PM

blas
this could have ben worded much smoother n to the pt. but nice np regardless & it wasnt worded bad or anything.. just couldve been nicer

ph
concise wording, lackluster concept. wayyy too simple here

v/blas

Suthaveli · 03-20-2019, 02:51 PM

Pharaoh bar was a basic bish bar. Find a more clever way to attack your opponent w. some harshness to it but keep it simple that people understand.Try reading guys like Orc, Resin, Dom to get an idea.

Blas was ok. He writes like an ex long bar who converted to short bar by the looks of his wording.

Mvgt- blas

Resin M-I-C · 03-20-2019, 02:53 PM

pharoah was a lil too simple for me, blas execution was solid and the name/wordplay hit pretty soundly

v blas

Destroyer · 03-21-2019, 09:40 AM

Blas was decent though I expected a bit more payoff
Pharoah, that was pretty basic, need to come a little more complex than that here

V/blas

MMLP · 03-21-2019, 11:52 AM

Put off by the spoon feeding 'FairWays' wordplay lol, it never usually needs highlighting as clear as that, that being said, better attempt than PA this time!

v/ blas

Orc · 03-21-2019, 12:12 PM

I saw spits bar which hurt the impact blas bar would have. It was decent tho. I’m not a fan of that style but it is effective a lot of the time.

Other guy had no wit. No surprise. Needs to be more impactful.

Gote blas

sral · 03-22-2019, 05:36 AM

Blas gets it

BodySnatcher · 03-22-2019, 10:24 AM

PA

Blas · 03-22-2019, 10:49 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BodySnatcher

PA

i'm going to ask the same for you now after this, it's unfortunate to learn you're a crybaby because you seemed like a normal non-emotional faggot but i guess that isn't the case.

03-20-2019, 01:23 PM	#11
DynamiCz ..GunbaR MessiaH.. Join Date: Jan 2018 Location: GuN RanGe Posts: 762 Battle Record: 16-10 Champed - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 9829181	u dropping wordplay or a meta? who cares nobodies buying what they see cuz anytime FairWays his options it's always ending with a 9-iron to the tee Nice wordplay here, wording was on point as well. Overall executed just right to take the W ----- what's it gonna take for this dude to Have respect i've got an idea- i'll Blas the tech at this bastard's neck Got to get creative fam, to statement-ish and no punch really executed V-Blas __________________ ...ThA New ErA...

03-20-2019, 01:56 PM	#12
Barcotic Needs no introduction Join Date: Mar 2016 Location: Toronto Posts: 4,496 Battle Record: 29-31 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Survivor Tournament - Pros vs. Joes - Key Grand Prix - Fight Night XX - NBL Tag Team - NBL Picture League - Battle Arena - Battle Arena Pics - BA Tag Team (2x) - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - BAL Battle Royale - NPL Roast Rep Power: 3061968	blas this could have ben worded much smoother n to the pt. but nice np regardless & it wasnt worded bad or anything.. just couldve been nicer ph concise wording, lackluster concept. wayyy too simple here v/blas __________________ Dummies finna die if they coming into mine boastin Twin glocks'll spark. Waterpark; everybody running when the slides open

03-20-2019, 02:53 PM	#14
Resin M-I-C Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 734 Battle Record: 33-9 Champed - 1-2 Punch Onslaught II - Tag Team Tournament V - 1-2 Punch Season III - Netcees SOL - Battle Arena - SOL Season I - NBL Season XIV - Netcees Battle League Rep Power: 8150231	pharoah was a lil too simple for me, blas execution was solid and the name/wordplay hit pretty soundly v blas __________________ C. O. B.

03-22-2019, 05:36 AM	#18
sral LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: CRUMPETVILLE Posts: 8,605 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899396	Blas gets it __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)

03-18-2019, 07:03 PM	#2
Blas BesT™ Join Date: Feb 2019 Posts: 597 Rep Power: 1628184	u dropping wordplay or a meta? who cares nobodies buying what they see cuz anytime FairWays his options it's always ending with a 9-iron to the tee

03-19-2019, 06:12 PM	#3
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	what's it gonna take for this dude to Have respect i've got an idea- i'll Blas the tech at this bastard's neck

03-19-2019, 07:47 PM	#4
Kill Spree Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 4,460 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 37645698	Pharoahs bar was a bit to basic of a generic at that... Blas had a cool nameplay wasn’t that harsh but creative V/blas

03-19-2019, 09:24 PM	#5
Incredible Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2016 Posts: 1,484 Battle Record: 6-15 Rep Power: 25972895	Well uh PA need more here for sure and by that I don't just mean more words not about that, just more content was too basic, try reading between the lines type of shit and flip it into a bar. Got Blas taking this, tie in was nice, name play kind eh, but was enough to get the job done. Vote = Blas

03-19-2019, 09:44 PM	#6
zelti Senior Member Join Date: May 2016 Posts: 346 Rep Power: 0	Blas - pretty cool punch here, haven’t seen this wp used on him before, so it was nice and fresh. No complaints here Pharoh - I liked the direction you were trying to take but it was just too simple to really hit. Definitely don’t over complicate your bars but you Gotta make them more meaningful Vote Blas

03-19-2019, 10:54 PM	#7
Real Spit Member Join Date: Mar 2019 Posts: 84 Rep Power: 608132	Even though Blas' punch is a worse version of a punch I dropped years ago it's better than Pharaoh's by a long shot. Come on Pharaoh a name play gotta have some wit/concept to it, that was just lazy. v/ Blas

03-20-2019, 05:09 AM	#9
Maximus Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 923 Battle Record: 25-26 Champed - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11169472	i got Blas taking this here, just a better execution. PA had a good concept but the execution was poor and it fell flat, didnt hit as it ought to

03-20-2019, 02:51 PM	#13
Suthaveli Prayers won't help. Join Date: Nov 2013 Location: Baltimore, Md Posts: 851 Battle Record: 7-9 Rep Power: 16534023	Pharaoh bar was a basic bish bar. Find a more clever way to attack your opponent w. some harshness to it but keep it simple that people understand.Try reading guys like Orc, Resin, Dom to get an idea. Blas was ok. He writes like an ex long bar who converted to short bar by the looks of his wording. Mvgt- blas

03-21-2019, 11:52 AM	#16
MMLP Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 614 Battle Record: 15-16 Champed - Write Week 9 Rep Power: 9768091	Put off by the spoon feeding 'FairWays' wordplay lol, it never usually needs highlighting as clear as that, that being said, better attempt than PA this time! v/ blas

03-21-2019, 12:12 PM	#17
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,163 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899393	I saw spits bar which hurt the impact blas bar would have. It was decent tho. I’m not a fan of that style but it is effective a lot of the time. Other guy had no wit. No surprise. Needs to be more impactful. Gote blas

03-22-2019, 10:24 AM	#19
BodySnatcher Hail Mary Haymakers Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: You know where I be at Posts: 1,785 Battle Record: 17-7 Champed - BAL Roast - Battle Arena League - BAL Season Champ Rep Power: 3840899	PA