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06-06-2013, 02:47 PM
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trick dont kill my vibe
I would fuck a bitch up if she fuck up my vibe
shut the fuck up ya too stuck up ta ride Im looking for a chill hoe for chill mode so chill woah I need ta get higher cuz I'm starting ta feel low! Its time for lift off a dime an a spliff *cough* A bitch can get lost if she ain't down ta split soft. A trick'll get hauled off after slipping her bra off Grippin my saw'd off an sawz all, have her body looking like Lara crofts tits after they're fuckin sawed off! Pepper her wit insults she can brush the salt off her face Bitch you can get a shower but you can't wash off the rape. Don't fuck up my high I'll fuck up ya eye You fuck up my vibe ima fuck up the sky. Quoting tech 9 ima bloody the moon, You just an inflated speck of dirt like a muddy balloon. Who got you all gassed up? Was it a past love? Got you thinkin you deserve better? Here *pass* puff! Take a couple hits forreal tho ya feel those? Buzz kicking harder than a new pair of steel toes Now ya looking for a meal hoe? Get the fuck outta here wit that shy shit Im enjoyin my vibe so bye bitch!
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06-06-2013, 04:50 PM
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LoL
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06-06-2013, 07:58 PM
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Best display of flow i have ever seen from u.
I can't say its Dope but its certainly improvement Netcees is bad for ya health.... |
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06-06-2013, 10:05 PM
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I feelin' the chill vibe in the beginning but then you went all horrorcore.
horrorcore + chill music do not mix.
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06-07-2013, 01:24 PM
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Pepper her wit insults she can brush the salt off her face
Bitch you can get a shower but you can't wash off the rape. ^lmao. pretty funny shit right there. Take a couple hits forreal tho ya feel those? Buzz kicking harder than a new pair of steel toes Now ya looking for a meal hoe? lol, steel toe line was mean. this verse went in a couple different directions. kept my attention all the way through though. 1
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06-09-2013, 02:37 AM
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ghost in the matrix
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Thanks guys, been tryin ta rtf lol
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06-10-2013, 12:29 AM
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hahaha.. i read this to some chill ass easy mo bee shit and the style def Vibed perfectly with it hahah. i think without the beat i would think this is wack but the style of this was not caring and don't fuck with my vibe so i won't do that. great vibe lol. u need to do some audio dude i think it would be dope to listen to cause u'de just drop some shit and it would flow
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06-18-2013, 02:47 AM
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ghost in the matrix
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Thanks bruh I'm waiting to get my laptop fixes to do more audio. Last bump
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06-18-2013, 12:22 PM
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the vibe i got off of this? one word - reaching
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