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Old 05-31-2013, 05:32 AM   #1
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I’m too uninspired to put entire verses together for their personal pleasure. I work at my leisure, type what I like, and if they don’t prefer it – Whatever! I like what I write, fuck the opinion of a couple of minions. Why would try to conjure a similitude of someone who’s never done something different? I guess I’m cut from a differing cloth. I love that it pisses you off. You chumps can all sit in your boxes, pigeon-holed and given roles while bumping unoriginal drops you think are dope. Shit is old. It’s like their creativity left along with their get up and go. They all write so similarly yet no one’s concepts of their own! How can you sit with your pen reiterating what the rest have just wrote? If you’re no different to them, you can’t expect us to hold you in some exemplary role and I’ve been finding this a lot. You know how it’s distilled as butter’s churned? It’s milked for what it’s worth but the cream rises to the top.


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Old 05-31-2013, 06:36 PM   #2
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This was cool bery abstract from the beginning
eventually the rest of the verse followed suit
At first i thought it was a lo.g ass intro
which maxe me go back again to confirm my observation
Regardless this was a dope verse my friend keep writing
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Old 06-02-2013, 07:09 PM   #3
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fuckin rediculous man. such realness. ur one of my all time faves hands down.. if not THE favorite. i just love ur style.


"I guess I’m cut from a differing cloth. I love that it pisses you off. You chumps can all sit in your boxes, pigeon-holed and given roles while bumping unoriginal drops you think are dope. Shit is old. It’s like their creativity left along with their get up and go. They all write so similarly yet no one’s concepts of their own! How can you sit with your pen reiterating what the rest have just wrote?"

OUCH!!!

sig material. shit is lyrical. spit some cereal cause u brandin' these flakes. Ha
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Old 06-02-2013, 07:12 PM   #4
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Nice piece of work, I love this topic... pretty cool style.
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Old 06-04-2013, 10:12 AM   #5
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cheers bruhs

i forgot who i fed last time, something by Flo Real prolly?

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