OK NETCEES - "S-O-B" Round 3.

Finnydot · 03-12-2018, 10:33 PM

https://soundcloud.com/isaac-meyer-3/s-o-b

LET'S GET IT.

Quote:

son of a bitch - that's what they call me
i don't know the reasons or day that it started
i only remember the feelins of trauma
cuz all that i wanted was bein supported
for my doin my thing, each way that i wanna go
lost all my friends it seems a long time ago
ain't that i needed'em i was just thinkin that
how did it come to this - or would i take'em back?
not on your life - no doubtin me twice
ain't got no problem wit travelin light
who doubt him tonight? you top of the list
prolly gon call me a son of a bitch
guess if you wish, but i'm lettin you know
you mention my mother and i'm cuttin your throat
think this a joke - let's try this again
fast as it started is how it'll end

SON OF A BITCH - THAT'S WHAT THEY CALL ME
SON OF A BITCH - DON'T MENTION MY MAMA
I'LL SHOW YOU THE REASONS THEY ALL THINK I'M CRAZY
I PROMISE YOU NONE OF YOU EVER COULD FADE ME

guess they want that old finny
whether not knowin what it meant
to drop stone cold on the ground face planted like
you don't want no problem wit a tickin time bomb
I'm - timothy mcveigh when i cook up my songs
hope you think that i'm wrong - or say that i won't
just for the fuckin chance to prove how long
i'mma keep on bangin, till the streets gon kill me
like - keep talkin shit till at LEAST i'm buried
in ya SLEEP y'all fear me - pray at LEAST god hear me
lemme eat, give me peace - I'LL UNLEASH HELL FURY LIKE
lemme break it down - i ain't here to fuck around
i be in it for the money too ain't no point in lyin
I - know that you prolly been wonderin how he been
comin so hard since not even one of these
tracks that i'm makin been wack cuz i'm makin them
why you keep askin me WHY I KEEP MAKIN'EM?!?!

Quote:

Originally Posted by Amen

Your delusional.

Finnydot · 03-12-2018, 10:54 PM

After exporting... Vocals a little loud. Fuggit.

Finnydot · 03-12-2018, 11:00 PM

Uploaded new version.

Geno · 03-13-2018, 02:10 AM

Dude. Ur rhymes read like something i would freestyle. Take some time and think about what yr gonna say. Put some thought into how u lace yhe flow and syllables. This is getting rediculous. You throw this shit together so fast man. Were all still gonna be here if you take ur time a little bit.

WRATH · 03-13-2018, 02:18 AM

The lyrics read like boring white boy rap. And content is emotionally under developed. I'll pass on this.

Finnydot · 03-13-2018, 02:43 AM

I provide the lyrics as a courtesy. Lol if you're not listening you're fucking up.

Finnydot · 03-13-2018, 02:44 AM

Lol @ only READING rap music and forming any kind of opinion of the artist.

Elemental P · 03-13-2018, 02:48 AM

Boy at first I thought people were just Fucking with you like these dicks do here all the time but.... Nah looks like they were right. I'm starting to think Ghost Really was literal bout you still dissing him in 2032 an shit. Hit my inbox man let ghost write for u or something shit.

Elemental P · 03-13-2018, 02:51 AM

By the way do you say

"Let's get it"

Like that autistic fucking douchebag Lil Cum or lil pumpkin spice or w.e cuz if so there's your issue, listen to better rappers.

Finnydot · 03-13-2018, 03:09 AM

Lol I never say "let's get it" in this song. But I will in the next song if you'll actually LISTEN instead of reading. LMAO

Matter fact, I can GUARANTEE I'll say it in my next song and flip it.

Finnydot · 03-13-2018, 03:15 AM

I just wanna say to everyone I appreciate the motivation you all have provided me. I hope you guys keep checking my material and offering all your loving and warm reception. It's really helped me grow as an artist this last week. I shook off some very thick rust. I'm hoping we can continue this fruitful relationship in the coming weeks as I finally finish my first album.

Thanks again.

Finnydot · 03-13-2018, 03:17 AM

LOL I finally took ALL the hate I've ever gotten from you assholes online and bottled it into a hot ass song that's short, sweet, and pungent. It's catchy, it's definitely single worthy.

Well done, fellas.

Ahh... this has been a good week indeed.

uh-oh · 03-13-2018, 05:37 AM

this was muchhhhh better

i fuck with it. beats better, switched the flow on the second, hooks cool. good shit

For Battling · 03-13-2018, 06:05 AM

I automatically read the lyrics in your voice and flow with the typical beat you provide so there’s no need to click links anymore

Finnydot · 03-13-2018, 06:28 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by For Battling

I automatically read the lyrics in your voice and flow with the typical beat you provide so there’s no need to click links anymore

And in that sense, you failed. But ok.

Keep hating, homie.

For Battling · 03-13-2018, 06:30 AM

Shux

Finnydot · 03-13-2018, 06:47 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by For Battling

Shux

Y'all are seriously some straight dorks. Full on nerds. Who would rather READ a rap song than listen? Lol y'all got pocket protectors and aviator glasses when you scrypt bro?

Lol y'all treating this like it's a homework assignment. Trying to grade my paper and hand me an F for formatting issues instead of listening to the story and what I was trying to say.

Lol lol

Y'all go listen to some fucking Aesop rock or sage Francis you rap queers.

uh-oh · 03-13-2018, 06:51 AM

dont post the lyrics

problem solved lol, they'll listen or they won't

none of these dudes opinions, mine included matter. the criticism is either constructive or it isn't, but at the end of the day its up to you to do what you do

so do what you do. its just getting a little tired watching you have the same arguments for 10 years now lol. people will like you or they won't.

so keep banging out fucko

lol

For Battling · 03-13-2018, 07:02 AM

If you think our opinions suck etc then why do you keep posting your songs here? Lol

Cool · 03-13-2018, 07:06 AM

The main problem is the simplicity of it. There was a time where I could freestyle this shit. The lyrics and your flow are way too basic. Challenge yourself to be more inventive. I don't care about the subject matter as long as it's dope, if you're writing at an elementary level then nothing you say will entice me to give your material a listen.

And if you're going to record diss tracks, stop with the generic filler.

03-13-2018, 02:10 AM	#4
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Dude. Ur rhymes read like something i would freestyle. Take some time and think about what yr gonna say. Put some thought into how u lace yhe flow and syllables. This is getting rediculous. You throw this shit together so fast man. Were all still gonna be here if you take ur time a little bit. __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

03-13-2018, 05:37 AM	#13
uh-oh DA GOD Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Canton Ohio Posts: 12,362 Battle Record: 1-0 Champed - Beat Battle II - Beat Battle V - Beat Bags Rep Power: 84181420	this was muchhhhh better i fuck with it. beats better, switched the flow on the second, hooks cool. good shit __________________ EVERYBODY I KNOW GOT WEED OR GOT POWDER BUT I AINT GOT EITHER. GOT ALOT OF DEMONS

03-13-2018, 06:51 AM	#18
uh-oh DA GOD Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Canton Ohio Posts: 12,362 Battle Record: 1-0 Champed - Beat Battle II - Beat Battle V - Beat Bags Rep Power: 84181420	dont post the lyrics problem solved lol, they'll listen or they won't none of these dudes opinions, mine included matter. the criticism is either constructive or it isn't, but at the end of the day its up to you to do what you do so do what you do. its just getting a little tired watching you have the same arguments for 10 years now lol. people will like you or they won't. so keep banging out fucko lol __________________ EVERYBODY I KNOW GOT WEED OR GOT POWDER BUT I AINT GOT EITHER. GOT ALOT OF DEMONS

03-13-2018, 07:06 AM	#20
Cool Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2017 Posts: 100 Rep Power: 0	The main problem is the simplicity of it. There was a time where I could freestyle this shit. The lyrics and your flow are way too basic. Challenge yourself to be more inventive. I don't care about the subject matter as long as it's dope, if you're writing at an elementary level then nothing you say will entice me to give your material a listen. And if you're going to record diss tracks, stop with the generic filler. __________________ Be Cool.

03-12-2018, 10:54 PM	#2
Finnydot Senior Member Join Date: May 2016 Posts: 2,052 Champed - Beat Battle I Rep Power: 10457441	After exporting... Vocals a little loud. Fuggit.

03-12-2018, 11:00 PM	#3
Finnydot Senior Member Join Date: May 2016 Posts: 2,052 Champed - Beat Battle I Rep Power: 10457441	Uploaded new version.

03-13-2018, 02:18 AM	#5
WRATH Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 910 Battle Record: 4-4 Rep Power: 7502715	The lyrics read like boring white boy rap. And content is emotionally under developed. I'll pass on this.

03-13-2018, 02:43 AM	#6
Finnydot Senior Member Join Date: May 2016 Posts: 2,052 Champed - Beat Battle I Rep Power: 10457441	I provide the lyrics as a courtesy. Lol if you're not listening you're fucking up.

03-13-2018, 02:44 AM	#7
Finnydot Senior Member Join Date: May 2016 Posts: 2,052 Champed - Beat Battle I Rep Power: 10457441	Lol @ only READING rap music and forming any kind of opinion of the artist.

03-13-2018, 02:48 AM	#8
Elemental P Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2018 Posts: 856 Rep Power: 4507456	Boy at first I thought people were just Fucking with you like these dicks do here all the time but.... Nah looks like they were right. I'm starting to think Ghost Really was literal bout you still dissing him in 2032 an shit. Hit my inbox man let ghost write for u or something shit.

03-13-2018, 02:51 AM	#9
Elemental P Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2018 Posts: 856 Rep Power: 4507456	By the way do you say "Let's get it" Like that autistic fucking douchebag Lil Cum or lil pumpkin spice or w.e cuz if so there's your issue, listen to better rappers.

03-13-2018, 03:09 AM	#10
Finnydot Senior Member Join Date: May 2016 Posts: 2,052 Champed - Beat Battle I Rep Power: 10457441	Lol I never say "let's get it" in this song. But I will in the next song if you'll actually LISTEN instead of reading. LMAO Matter fact, I can GUARANTEE I'll say it in my next song and flip it.

03-13-2018, 03:15 AM	#11
Finnydot Senior Member Join Date: May 2016 Posts: 2,052 Champed - Beat Battle I Rep Power: 10457441	I just wanna say to everyone I appreciate the motivation you all have provided me. I hope you guys keep checking my material and offering all your loving and warm reception. It's really helped me grow as an artist this last week. I shook off some very thick rust. I'm hoping we can continue this fruitful relationship in the coming weeks as I finally finish my first album. Thanks again.

03-13-2018, 03:17 AM	#12
Finnydot Senior Member Join Date: May 2016 Posts: 2,052 Champed - Beat Battle I Rep Power: 10457441	LOL I finally took ALL the hate I've ever gotten from you assholes online and bottled it into a hot ass song that's short, sweet, and pungent. It's catchy, it's definitely single worthy. Well done, fellas. Ahh... this has been a good week indeed.

03-13-2018, 06:05 AM	#14
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633916	I automatically read the lyrics in your voice and flow with the typical beat you provide so there’s no need to click links anymore

03-13-2018, 06:30 AM	#16
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633916	Shux

03-13-2018, 07:02 AM	#19
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633916	If you think our opinions suck etc then why do you keep posting your songs here? Lol